Band 4.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

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IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 4.0)

A few years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has repidly increased. But some people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is good thing.

On the hand, the internet is very important for the air travel, tarde and most popular cluture. The internet use every person. For example the internet use the office work, school work, wacthing the videos and researching the information so that the internet is use the globalisation has repidly increased and the internet is very usefull the daliy life and the internet use for the trading, air travel and the the internet use the mobile phones.

Secondly, some people belive that the increased interaction between nations through the internet only use globalisation is a good thing beacuse this people believe that the interent not use for the everyone the internet only use the globalisation and the internet not use everyone because on your these people opinion the internet is not useing each other.

In my opinion the internet is very important the useing the everyone and my experience the interent very help full in my life. I am useing the interent for the trading, office work and upload the files and the interent useing the new researching and devloped nwe skills and very helpful the the studies and

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 3.0

The response attempts to discuss globalisation and gives a personal view, especially in the final paragraph, where you say the internet is important and helpful in your life. However, the discussion is only minimally developed: most of the response focuses on internet use rather than explaining whether increased interaction between nations is beneficial, and the opposing view is difficult to understand. The examples about office work, schoolwork and research are relevant to internet use but do not clearly show the effects of globalisation between countries. The response also ends mid-sentence, leaving the opinion and supporting ideas incomplete. It contains 196 words, below the required 250; 23 words copied from the task prompt were not counted. To improve, address both sides directly and explain each point with a clear, relevant example.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 3.5

There is a basic attempt to organise the response: it begins with an introduction, uses “On the hand” and “Secondly” to signal points, and includes a separate paragraph for your opinion. However, the ideas do not progress clearly from one point to the next. The second body paragraph repeats the claim about the internet and globalisation without making the opposing argument understandable, while the first paragraph combines several examples in one long sequence. Repeated use of “the internet” and “use” also makes connections mechanical, and the final sentence stops before the thought is complete. Use one paragraph for each main viewpoint, begin each with a clear topic sentence, and connect explanations and examples with precise referencing rather than repetition.

Lexical Resource: Band 4.0

Your vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with “internet,” “use,” and “important” appearing repeatedly. Some relevant topic words are present, including “globalisation,” “air travel,” “trading,” and “researching,” so the reader can identify the general subject. However, spelling errors such as “repidly,” “cluture,” “wacthing,” and “usefull” are frequent, and several word choices or forms make meaning difficult, as in “the internet use the globalisation” and “the internet not useing each other.” Aim to use a small range of accurate topic vocabulary and collocations, such as “connect people across countries,” “international trade,” and “access information.” Proofread spelling and choose words that express the intended relationship between the internet and globalisation.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 4.5

You attempt some longer sentences and use basic linking structures, including “For example” and “so that,” but most sentence patterns are simple or incomplete, and grammatical errors often obscure the intended meaning. For instance, “The internet use every person” lacks a correct verb form, while “I am useing the interent for the trading” has problems with verb construction and article use. The opening “A few years” is also an incomplete time expression, and the final sentence ends without a completed clause. Practise forming clear subject–verb sentences first, then combine related ideas using accurate clauses. Check verb forms, articles, and sentence boundaries, and make sure every sentence is complete before adding further detail.

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