Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-07-29

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows a town square and surrounding area in 2014 and the plans for development of the area to be completed by 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The diagram illustrates a town square and surrounding area in 2014 and the proposed development of the area by 2020.

Overall, town became more developed by 2020. Many old building were replaced by new ones, and more new buildings were planned.

On the north side, fish market was replaced by supermarket.

Town hall remained unchanged. On the west side, history museum was transformed by local artists gallery. On the east side, administrative buildings ware replaced by small different shops.

On the south side, there were fish restaurants and bar before later it developed and changed by bars and restaurants. Fountain remained unchanged. Band stand is replaced by two plant beds. Two covered seating and children playground were added by 2020.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.5

The response fails to meet the minimum word count requirement of 150 words, which significantly impacts the ability to fully develop the response. While you have identified the main features of the diagram, the analysis is quite brief and lacks the depth required for a higher band. You have successfully highlighted the key changes, such as the replacement of the fish market and the addition of new facilities, but the lack of sufficient detail and the failure to reach the word count limit mean the task is only partially addressed.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.5

The response is organized into short paragraphs, which helps with readability. However, the use of cohesive devices is quite limited and repetitive. You rely heavily on simple directional markers like 'On the north side' and 'On the east side' to link ideas. To improve, try to use a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect your sentences more fluidly, such as 'In contrast,' 'Furthermore,' or 'Regarding the southern area.' The overall progression of ideas is logical, but the mechanical nature of the transitions limits the score.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.0

Your vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks the range and precision expected at higher levels. You use basic verbs like 'replaced,' 'changed,' and 'added' repeatedly. While these words are accurate in context, they do not demonstrate a sophisticated command of language. To improve, try to incorporate more varied and descriptive vocabulary related to urban development, such as 'demolished,' 'converted,' 'renovated,' or 'integrated.' There are also minor errors in word choice, such as 'small different shops' which sounds unnatural.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

The response contains a mix of simple and some complex sentence structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors. For example, you missed articles in several places ('town became,' 'fish market was,' 'band stand is'), and there are errors in verb tense and preposition usage, such as 'changed by bars' instead of 'changed into bars.' Additionally, there is a spelling error ('ware' instead of 'were'). To improve, focus on consistent article usage and ensure that your verb tenses are used correctly to describe past and future states.

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