Band 4.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 4.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-08-12
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Concern for the environment is growing and more and more people are choosing to recycle. But some people suggest that recycling is not enough. They believe we need to consume less.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Student answer (Band 4.0)
Recent years we are use natural things very randomly .In people are argue that environment t safety regarding to the We are recycling product .other individuals are argue that recycling only the one and only option we people are consume less products as well as,in my point of view both have advantages and disadvantages have there.
On the one hand we are use most of the products like plastic and everything we are the population was high so we are use products very high this is happened to the old we are very dangerous situation we face it in future that's why the recycling is the best one of the option to recycling at least 50% products or something else it is useful useful the and future also.
On the other hand but people are most consuming higher products and plastic are something else it is the very necessary to use the products and something else less products and plastics and the bags everything use very less VR to grow up health again and health we do not a only the way of recycling we are use the products used for the future also because of we are only recycling only 50% products only that's why are definitely useless products like use the 32 something else and something we are used the enrollment safety very high.
In conclusion, we are use the less products regarding to the try to be recycling we are firstly try to be recycling and secondly do the less provides are used they are searching for the another ways also so both have the disadvantage and advantage have.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 4.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 4.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 4.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 4.0 |
| Overall | 4.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 4.0
The response addresses the prompt by discussing both recycling and consuming less. However, the development of ideas is significantly hindered by unclear expression and a lack of logical depth. While you mention both views, the arguments are repetitive and lack specific examples or clear reasoning. The position is stated in the introduction but remains underdeveloped throughout the body paragraphs. To improve, you should focus on clearly explaining 'why' recycling is beneficial and 'why' reducing consumption is necessary, rather than repeating the same points. The conclusion is also quite vague and does not effectively summarize your stance.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 4.0
The essay is divided into paragraphs, which is a positive step. However, the logical progression of ideas is weak. Transitions such as 'On the one hand' and 'On the other hand' are used, but the sentences within these paragraphs often lack a clear connection to one another. Many sentences are fragmented or run-on, making it difficult for the reader to follow your argument. Referencing is often unclear, with frequent use of 'something else' and 'the products,' which does not help the reader understand the specific points you are trying to make. Improved use of linking words and clearer sentence structure is needed.
Lexical Resource — Band 4.0
The vocabulary is very limited and repetitive. You frequently use basic words like 'products,' 'things,' and 'use' without variation. There are also significant issues with word choice and collocation, such as 'environment t safety regarding to the' and 'we are use natural things very randomly.' These errors often impede communication, making it difficult to grasp the intended meaning. To reach a higher band, you need to expand your vocabulary to include more precise terms related to environmental issues and ensure that words are used in their correct grammatical context.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 4.0
The essay contains frequent grammatical errors that make the text difficult to read. There are consistent issues with verb tense (e.g., 'we are use'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Many sentences are incomplete or lack a clear subject and verb. There is almost no evidence of complex sentence structures, and the basic sentences produced are often inaccurate. Punctuation is also inconsistent, which further disrupts the flow. You need to focus on mastering basic sentence construction—ensuring every sentence has a clear subject and a correctly conjugated verb—before attempting more complex structures.
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