Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 21 · 2026-07-31

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

The best way to provide enough homes in large cities is to build tall apartment blocks.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

In urban areas like cities it was covered by building tall towers to offer suffecient homes in better option. I fully agree with this statement.

First of all mostly in the cities open places are in construction with long towers to save place and avoid traffic by providing sufficent houses instead of small. For an instance if people build individual houses they are not sufficent and not effortable they are covered by appartment with plenty of home with better plan. So it was getting a profit of together consturction by building towers and may be rose in value of that areas based on thi construtions.

In other words, every one need to check there safety to stay in crowd areas especially in cities instead of arranging workers and some maintances of induvidual homes. The best option by building a appartment and getting plan of construction another facilites like swimming pools and others are advantage. It is easy to maintance by arraning common worker to entier apparment for instance watchman.

On the other hand, taffic is most disadvange in towns by constructing new building it may be the solution to avoid long time traffic. For instance a heavy vechile need to delivery iteams to individual homes thier no special place for parking while in appartments by utilizing parking area and easy to delivery at time to all homes is much easier to reduce waiting time.

In conclusion, by setablishing high towers is good option to provide best home plan oinstead of individual homes with some other advantages.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0

The essay addresses the prompt by expressing a clear position in favor of tall apartment blocks. However, the development of ideas is limited. While you mention space-saving and convenience, the arguments are somewhat repetitive and lack depth. For instance, the point about traffic is mentioned but not fully explained in a logical way. To reach a higher band, you should provide more specific, well-developed examples and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a distinct, fully explored argument rather than repeating the same points about 'individual homes' versus 'apartments'.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The essay is organized into paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the structure. However, the use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or inaccurate (e.g., 'In other words' is used incorrectly to introduce a new point about safety). Some sentences are difficult to follow due to awkward phrasing, such as 'So it was getting a profit of together consturction'. To improve, focus on using transition words like 'furthermore', 'consequently', or 'however' more naturally to link your ideas and ensure that each sentence flows logically from the previous one.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.5

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive, with frequent spelling errors such as 'suffecient', 'appartment', 'maintance', and 'consturction'. These errors occasionally make it difficult for the reader to grasp your meaning. You rely on basic words like 'good', 'better', and 'easy'. To improve, you need to expand your range of vocabulary to include more precise terms related to urban planning and housing, and pay closer attention to spelling and word formation to ensure your writing is professional and clear.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5

There is a lack of control over complex sentence structures, and the essay contains frequent grammatical errors that impede communication. Examples include 'In urban areas like cities it was covered by building tall towers' and 'every one need to check there safety'. Subject-verb agreement, article usage, and tense consistency are problematic throughout the text. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence patterns before attempting more complex ones, and proofread your work specifically for common errors like missing articles and incorrect verb forms.

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