Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 21 · 2026-11-09

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Some people say that in the digital age, theatres and cinemas are no longer important as people can watch all the entertainment they want online. Others argue that theatres and cinemas are still important both economically and culturally.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

In recent years, online platforms have attracted considerable attention. This essay will explore different aspects of the entertainment industry. I believe that movies are only for the big screen. Although the introduction of online platforms offers several benefits, they are unable to replace the big screen.

In recent times, so many online platforms have been introduced which are easily accessible, consumer-friendly, and also have a variety of shows available there. But I think some shows are primarily for the big screen. Like recently, there is a movie released in 70MM IMAX, The Odyssey, which is only for specific cinemas around the world where there is an IMAX projector available. So, for someone who is a cult cinematic fan, it's hard for him to watch that movie online.

Online platforms have many advantages, like you don't have to travel or pay for booking, as there is a specific amount for which you can buy a subscription, and you don't have to wait longer for different movies. Thousands of movies and shows are available, and even if you don't like the shows, you can switch to others. But it's not possible with cinema because you have already paid for the ticket, and if you don't like it, you do not have another option to switch to another one. Either you can leave or continue watching. So, there are more perks available with online platforms. And one more aspect: you can enjoy it on your bed, couch, outside, everywhere. Like, you don't have to stick to one seat, and you can enjoy it alone or with your partner instead of with many people if you are not a social person at all.

So, in my point of view, filmmakers want to show movies on the big screen. That's why they want us to go and enjoy. For me, cinema is a good experience.

IN CONCLUSION, I WOULD SAY ONLINE PLATFORMS HAVE PROVIDED MORE EASE TO PEOPLE, BUT THE CINEMATIC EXPERIENCE IS STILL ON ANOTHER LEVEL.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5

Your position is clear: you value the cinema experience, while recognising that online platforms offer convenience. You also give relevant examples, such as the IMAX release, and compare the flexibility of streaming with the fixed choice of a cinema ticket. However, the task asks you to discuss both views, including the economic and cultural importance of theatres and cinemas. The response mainly compares viewing convenience and screen size; it does not explain cinemas’ economic contribution or cultural role, and the case for their continuing importance is only briefly developed. The online-platform view is more fully supported than the opposing view. To strengthen the response, address those specific economic and cultural arguments and develop your own position with reasons that directly answer the full question.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 6.0

The response has a recognisable structure, with an introduction, developed body paragraphs and a concluding statement. Ideas within the online-platform paragraph progress logically from cost and choice to comfort and privacy, and examples help illustrate the points. However, the overall progression does not clearly organise the two views requested: the discussion of cinema’s importance is brief and appears mainly in the final paragraph, while the earlier paragraphs focus on streaming. Some linking is mechanical, particularly repeated openings such as “But” and “So,” and “And one more aspect” is conversational rather than a clear academic transition. The conclusion restates the contrast but does not bring together the two sides. Use separate, balanced paragraphs for each view and clearer links between claims and examples.

Lexical Resource: Band 6.0

You use an adequate range of vocabulary to discuss entertainment and viewing habits, including “accessible,” “subscription,” “cinematic fan,” and “cinematic experience.” These choices make your meaning clear, and the IMAX example gives the discussion some topic-specific language. However, several expressions are broad or informal, such as “shows,” “perks,” “big screen,” and “on another level,” which limits precision and academic tone. Some collocations are also awkward, including “a movie released in 70MM IMAX” and “there is a specific amount for which you can buy a subscription.” Aim for more precise terms for cinema’s cultural and economic roles, and use natural collocations when describing ticket costs, streaming services and theatrical releases.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 6.0

You use a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, including a concession in “Although the introduction of online platforms offers several benefits” and conditional phrasing in “if you don’t like it.” Most sentences communicate their meaning clearly, and errors rarely obstruct understanding. Some sentence structures are awkward or incomplete, however. “Like recently, there is a movie released…” is an informal fragment-like construction, while “So, for someone who is a cult cinematic fan, it’s hard for him…” shifts awkwardly from a general person to “him.” The repeated use of “you” also makes some general claims less controlled. Practise forming complete, formal sentences and maintaining consistent subjects and pronouns; this will make your varied structures more accurate and polished.

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