Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 21 · 2026-08-06

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

All university undergraduate courses should include a period of time spent studying abroad or doing a work placement.

Do you think the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

All university undergraduate courses should include a period of time spent studying in different countries or doing a work placement yes i think benefits of this would be outweigh the disadvantages.

i think it's a good opportunity for a student to spent studying aboard to explore the culture of different countries and teaching methods of different teachers.

Before completing the undergraduate study, students should make be able to search his jobs during his study or in a university or doing they' after their graduation.

I have one example regarding this UGRADE exchange program of America, which may facilitate many country students to come in America on fully funded scholarship program for one semester and gain education and practical work from different universities and any other public sector colleges.

They generate also jobs opportunity in his country for international students after completing their education. These are good both topic is very informative and good. Every country has summer vacations in all countries. So, i think the universities departments help to your students in searching them jobs or internships they gain experience in free time regarding their So, it's a good option for students to save his precious time in vacations .it is also an interesting topic to generate many ideas related to jobs.

in conclusions. Every university have taken step to add course in students study program so they can easily gain jobs after completing their education and explore the world culture and their histories, so every higher education department should take step in it.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0

The response addresses the prompt by expressing a clear position that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. However, the development of ideas is limited. While you mention cultural exploration and job prospects, the arguments are somewhat repetitive and lack depth. The example of the UGRADE program is relevant but not fully explained in terms of how it specifically supports the argument regarding mandatory study abroad or work placements. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct, well-supported point rather than repeating general statements about job searching. The conclusion is present but lacks a summary of the main arguments provided.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0

The essay is divided into paragraphs, but the logical progression of ideas is weak. Transitions between sentences are often missing or awkward, such as the abrupt shift to the UGRADE example. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, for example, the phrase 'These are good both topic is very informative' does not connect logically to the previous sentence. Referencing is also unclear at times, particularly with the use of pronouns like 'his' and 'they' which do not always have a clear antecedent. Improving the use of linking words would help the reader follow your argument more easily.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.0

The vocabulary is generally basic and repetitive. You rely on simple terms like 'good', 'jobs', and 'study'. There are also issues with word choice and collocation, such as 'search his jobs' instead of 'search for jobs' or 'gain education' instead of 'receive an education'. While the meaning is generally conveyed, the range is insufficient to express complex ideas with precision. To reach a higher band, try to incorporate more academic vocabulary related to education and professional development, and pay closer attention to how words are paired together in English.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0

The essay contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are consistent issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'Every university have taken step'), article usage, and sentence structure. Many sentences are fragmented or run-on, such as 'So, i think the universities departments help to your students in searching them jobs or internships they gain experience in free time regarding their So, it's a good option'. The range of structures is limited, consisting mostly of simple sentences. Focusing on basic sentence construction and ensuring subject-verb agreement will significantly improve the clarity of your writing.

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