Band 7.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.0 · Cambridge IELTS 21 · 2026-08-03
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Categories of library users
Student answer (Band 7.0)
The pie chart and table illustrate the results of a university library survey, showing the categories of library users and their levels of satisfaction with five aspects of the library's services.
Overall, full-time undergraduate students accounted for by far largest proportion of library users, whereas academic staff represented the smallest group. In terms of satisfaction, respondents were generally positive, with the helpfulness of staff receiving the highest approval, while the availability of journals and the reliability of Wi-Fi attracted the greatest levels of dissatisfaction.
Regarding the categories of users, full-time undergraduates made up 44% of all library users, making them the dominant group. Full-time postgraduates were the second-largest category at 25%, followed by part-time postgraduates, who accounted for 16%. By contrast, distance-learning students represented only 8%, while academic staff comprised the smallest proportion, at 7%.
With regard to user satisfaction, the helpfulness of staff received the most favourable feedback, with 95% of respondents being very satisfied and the remaining 5% fairly satisfied. Library opening hours also performed well, as 65% were very satisfied and 35% fairly satisfied. Satisfaction was comparatively lower for the availability of books, with 10% expressing dissatisfaction. The poorest results were recorded for the availability of journals and the reliability of Wi-Fi, where 20% and 19% of users, respectively, were not satisfied.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.0 |
| Overall | 7.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.0
You have provided a comprehensive summary of the data, covering all key features of both the pie chart and the table. You successfully identified the main trends, such as the dominance of full-time undergraduates and the high satisfaction levels regarding staff helpfulness. The comparisons are accurate and well-integrated, such as contrasting the high satisfaction for staff with the dissatisfaction regarding Wi-Fi and journals. The overview is clear and effectively highlights the most significant findings, which is essential for a high band score. You have fully addressed all parts of the task with no omissions.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.5
The response is logically organized, with a clear introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs that group information thematically. The progression of ideas is smooth, moving logically from user categories to satisfaction levels. You make effective use of cohesive devices such as 'whereas', 'in terms of', 'by contrast', and 'with regard to', which help guide the reader through the data. Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate the two distinct data sets. The flow of information is natural and professional throughout.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.5
You demonstrate a wide and precise range of vocabulary appropriate for an academic report. Phrases like 'accounted for by far the largest proportion', 'dominant group', and 'favourable feedback' show a good command of language. You avoid repetition and use specific terminology to describe the data accurately. There are no noticeable errors in word choice or collocation. The vocabulary is sophisticated enough to convey the information clearly and effectively, meeting the requirements for a high band score.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.0
Your writing displays a high level of grammatical control. You use a variety of complex sentence structures, such as participial phrases ('making them the dominant group') and subordinate clauses, with high accuracy. Punctuation is used correctly to manage complex information. The majority of your sentences are error-free, and there are no slips that impede communication. The control over tense and subject-verb agreement is consistent throughout the response, reflecting a strong grasp of English grammar.
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