Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 21 · 2026-09-11
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Categories of library users
Student answer (Band 7.5)
The provided materials present the results of a survey conducted among library users at a university, encompassing a pie chart categorising the types of users and a table detailing satisfaction levels with various library services.
Overall, full-time undergraduates constitute the largest user group, while staff satisfaction is notably highest for staff helpfulness and opening hours, and lowest for the availability of journals and Wi-Fi reliability.
The pie chart reveals that full-time undergraduates dominate the library user population, accounting for 44%, followed by full-time postgraduates at 25%. Part-time postgraduates make up 16%, while distance learning users and academic staff represent smaller proportions of 8% and 7%, respectively.
According to the satisfaction table, the most favourable responses were recorded for the helpfulness of staff, with 95% of users very satisfied and a mere 5% fairly satisfied. Library opening hours also received positive feedback, with 65% very satisfied and 35% fairly satisfied, and no users expressed dissatisfaction. Conversely, the availability of journals received the lowest satisfaction, with only 45% very satisfied, 35% fairly satisfied, and a notable 20% not satisfied. Similarly, Wi-Fi reliability and book availability showed moderate satisfaction levels, with 48% and 50% very satisfied, respectively, and dissatisfaction rates of 19% and 10%.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
The response effectively addresses all parts of the task. You have provided a clear overview of the data, highlighting the main trends in user categories and satisfaction levels. The selection of data is accurate, and you have successfully made relevant comparisons, such as contrasting the high satisfaction with staff helpfulness against the lower satisfaction regarding journal availability. The information is well-supported by the provided figures, and the report is balanced, covering both the chart and the table comprehensively. No key features were overlooked, and the response maintains a professional, analytical tone throughout.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The response is logically organized, with a clear introduction, an overview, and two distinct body paragraphs—one for the pie chart and one for the table. The progression of ideas is smooth and easy to follow. You have used a range of cohesive devices effectively, such as 'while', 'followed by', 'conversely', and 'similarly', which help to connect the data points naturally. Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate the different data sets, and referencing is clear throughout the text. The structure is coherent and supports the overall purpose of the report.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.5
You have demonstrated a good range of vocabulary appropriate for an academic report. Phrases such as 'constitute the largest user group', 'dominate the library user population', and 'recorded for the helpfulness of staff' show a high level of precision. The use of 'favourable responses' and 'notable' adds variety to the description. The vocabulary is used accurately and naturally, contributing to the clarity of the report. There are no significant errors in word choice or collocation, and the language used is well-suited to the task of summarizing statistical data.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The response displays a wide range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and accurate use of subordinate clauses. For instance, the opening sentence effectively combines multiple pieces of information using a participial phrase. Punctuation is used correctly, and there are no grammatical errors that impede communication. The majority of sentences are error-free, and the control over tense and subject-verb agreement is consistent. The writing is fluent and demonstrates a high level of grammatical competence, which is appropriate for an IELTS Band 8 level.
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