Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 21 · 2026-09-24
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Categories of library users
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The provided two diagrams compared at university's library users' survey results. The provided pie chart highlights data related to categories of library users and the table describes library user satisfaction. The information is given in percentages for both diagrams.
Overall, the pie chart containes five categories and full-time undergraduate category took the lead in the group, however, academic staff category made up the lowest data. The table include six library user satisfaction and the highest satisfaction is helpfulness of staff but the library opening hours possesses the lowest position of all.
The full-time undergraduate category is in the first position with 44%. the full-time postgraduate
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.0
Talaba doiraviy diagramma va jadvalni tanishtirish orqali vizual ma'lumotlarni jamlashga harakat qilgan. Biroq, javob juda yetarli darajada rivojlantirilmagan va gap o'rtasida to'satdan uzilib qolgan ('The full-time undergraduate category is in the first position with 44%. the full-time postgraduate'). Qolaversa, so'z soni atigi 105 so'mni tashkil etib, majburiy 150 so'mlik minimal talabdan ancha past. Ushbu uzunlik talabining bajarilmagani sababli, vazifa faqat qisman bajarilgan va baho Band 5.0 bilan cheklangan.
Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0
Matn asosiy qismlarga bo'lingan bo'lib, ayrim kirish va overview elementlarini o'z ichiga oladi ('Overall, the pie chart containes...'). Biroq, matnning chala qolganligi sababli, bayon ketma-ketligi to'satdan uzilgan. Bog'lovchi vositalar oddiy va takrorlanuvchi, masalan, 'and' va 'however'. Abzaslarga bo'lishga harakat qilingan, biroq oxirgi asosiy qism faqat bitta tugallanmagan gapdan iborat.
Lexical Resource: Band 5.0
Ishlatilgan lug'at nisbatan oddiy va takrorlanuvchi bo'lib, 'took the lead', 'made up the lowest data' va 'highest satisfaction' kabi iboralarni o'z ichiga oladi. 'containes' o'rniga 'contains' kabi imlo xatolari mavjud. Lug'at boyligi oddiy taqqoslashlarni yetkazish uchun yetarli bo'lsa-da, uning doirasi cheklangan va yuqoriroq ball olish uchun yetarli emas.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0
Talaba g'oyalarni qarama-qarshi qo'yish uchun 'however' so'zidan foydalanish kabi oddiy va murakkab gap tuzilmalarini aralashtirib ishlatishga harakat qilgan. Biroq, grammatik xatolar va noqulay ifodalar mavjud, masalan, 'the full-time undergraduate category took the lead in the group' va 'possesses the lowest position of all'. Javob tugallanmagan gap bo'lagi bilan to'satdan yakunlanadi, bu esa yaxlit matn ustidan grammatik nazoratning zaifligini ko'rsatadi.
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