Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-09-29
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
You work for an entertainment company which plans to open a new theatre soon. You want to invite a famous actor to open the new theatre.
Write a letter to this famous actor. In your letter
give some information about the new theatre
invite her/him to open the new theatre
explain why she/he would be a good person to open the theatre
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear........,
Student answer (Band 6.0)
Dear Sir,
I hopw this letter find you well. I am Asksh gupta working as a Senior Project Manager at Eros Entertainment. I am glad to inform you that we are planning to open a new multistory theatre in the city and I would be honoured if you could inuagarate it.
This theatre is one of the biggest cinema hall in the city, which has 4 floors and 3 screens. I also want to mentioned that we are launching first 4dx screen in the country. We are planning to inugarate it on 12th Nov 2026 and as a part of Eros Entertainment we humbley invite you for the inuagaration event.
As you are one of the leading actor of our nation you inspire lot of people, so your presence on the opening ceromony would be great mean to us as well as to your followers.
I sincerely hope you will accept ou invitation and honoured us with your presence
Sincerely,
Akash Gupta.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 6.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.5 |
| Overall | 6.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 6.5
The response covers all three bullet points required in the prompt. You gave information about the new theatre by mentioning it is multistory with four floors, three screens, and the country's first 4DX screen. You included an invitation for the inauguration event on November 12th, 2026. Finally, you explained why the actor would be suitable, noting that as a leading actor who inspires many, their presence would mean a great deal to the company and their fans. The tone is appropriate for an invitation letter, although some mechanical errors occur. All parts of the task are adequately addressed, earning a solid Band 6.5.
Coherence and Cohesion: Band 6.0
The letter maintains a coherent overall arrangement with a clear beginning, middle, and end. The progression of ideas makes sense as you transition from introducing yourself and the project, to giving details about the theatre and the invitation, and finally to explaining why the actor is a good fit. However, paragraphing is somewhat weak, as the middle section packs multiple ideas into a single dense block of text rather than separating them into distinct paragraphs. Cohesive devices are occasionally mechanical, but overall the structure is understandable.
Lexical Resource: Band 6.0
The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, attempting some less common collocations such as 'Senior Project Manager' and 'leading actor'. However, there are several spelling and word-choice errors that detract from the writing, including 'hopw' instead of 'hope', 'Asksh' instead of 'Akash', 'inuagarate' instead of 'inaugurate', 'mentioned' instead of 'mention', and 'ceromony' instead of 'ceremony'. Despite these errors, meaning is not impeded, placing the vocabulary firmly in the Band 6 category.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.5
You attempted a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, such as relative clauses in 'This theatre is one of the biggest cinema hall in the city, which has 4 floors and 3 screens.' However, there are several grammatical and punctuation errors throughout the text, including subject-verb agreement issues ('cinema hall' should be 'cinema halls'), missing capitalization, and awkward phrasing such as 'would be great mean to us'. Punctuation is also sparse at the end of sentences. Because errors occur frequently but do not impede overall communication, this meets the Band 5.5 criteria.
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