Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 21 · 2026-09-24
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Nowadays many large international companies offer their staff the opportunity to spend a period of time living and working in another country.
Why might this opportunity be good for employees?
What advantages does this development have for companies?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
In today`s world, numerous huge international companies provide their empolyee the opprtunity to spend a period of time living and instructing in another country. To the best of my knowledge it is very beneficial for te members of society becaue the learn new skills and for busniess to grow internatinally. In this eassy, I will explain the advantages for bot stuff and companies. To begin with, the majority individulas would like to work outside country, like a euroupe, as they offer hight salery that is very helful for people. Besides, the stuff can leran their culture and laguage that is crucial for worker. For exemaple if they leran English esaily they start own business their and also eran alot of money from out side country. However, the empolyee leran effortless their communcationa skills and a good behivour. In addtion, there are company offer a great facilites for worker, like healthy food and provide oustading place for living because of this most individuals happy to work international compnaies. Secondly, From my perspective it is also useful for international companise offer chance for another country stuff, due to some outside the individulas are very excellent which need your compnais. For instance, some work we cannot easily understand and another country many individuals have alot of experince, becaue of this it is helpful for business. Morever, many outside country worker is hardwork, and also do work with panchul. In conclusion, working international companis is very advantages for empolyee becaue the stuff leran alot of thing from iconic business, However, their officer is very profissional and friendly. In addtion the company also get benefit from worker, as the stuff enthuasiastic about international companies work, If you offer any amount of sallery, they will accept, duo to the live international companies work.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 4.5 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.0
The response addresses both parts of the task, discussing why the opportunity is good for employees and what advantages it brings to companies. The writer includes relevant ideas, such as learning new skills, earning a higher salary, and bringing valuable international experience back to the company. However, the development of these ideas is frequently limited and lacks depth or specific, well-articulated examples. Expressions like 'for example if they leran English esaily they start own business their' show a tendency to over-generalize and remain somewhat superficial. While all prompts are addressed, the arguments lack clarity in places due to expression issues, placing this performance at Band 5.0.
Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0
The text is divided into paragraphs, including an introduction, body paragraphs for employees and companies, and a conclusion. However, the overall progression is disrupted by frequent awkward transitions and a lack of clear mechanical linking devices. Cohesive devices are either inadequate, repetitive, or inaccurate, such as using 'Secondly, From my perspective it is also useful' to introduce the second body paragraph. Referencing is sometimes unclear, and the mechanical flow suffers due to run-on sentences and punctuation errors, reflecting the descriptors for Band 5.0.
Lexical Resource: Band 5.0
The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with numerous spelling errors throughout the essay, such as 'empolyee', 'opprtunity', 'busniess', 'salery', 'exemaple', 'laguage', 'behivour', 'compnaise', 'panchul', and 'profisional'. The writer attempts some less common vocabulary items like 'internatinally', 'enthuasiastic', and 'profisional', but these attempts are frequently marred by inaccuracies in spelling and word choice. The lexical range is minimally adequate for the task, causing some difficulty for the reader, which aligns with Band 4.5, rounded to Band 5.0 based on positive marking for attempt.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 4.5
The student attempts a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but frequent grammatical and punctuation errors dominate the text. There are persistent issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and awkward phrasing, such as 'To the best of my knowledge it is very beneficial for te members of society becaue the learn new skills'. Many complex structures are faulty, resulting in frequent errors that cause difficulty for the reader. While communication is still generally achieved, the density of structural and grammatical errors firmly places this response at Band 4.5, awarded as 4.5.
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