Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-11-09

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

Yes,I beleive that at now days there were more opportunities and choices rather than past.

Through this choices we have manage our work digitally and also handle it by computer.

Yes,I agree from this statement because now adays we have many oputunites like computer,mobilephones,tabs and etc.This things were work by internet. Internet is a big source new technology because through internet we have watch any thing which we want like our school work any type of asingment and any information related to the world and etc. It is to much helpful for men life.

Through this technology we also want to anywhere the science also build an navigation system through which is helpful for us that were we went to go we just open navigation app and go somewhere we have to go.

There is an many examples of this.I share my own experiences of my life below:

through this opportunitys,I have want to understand anything like asiingment,my person work and even my father business stateges,I just give an prompt to the application like chatgpt,claude,meta etc.

and he explain all that things which we have want.Through these all the things our work were become easy and enjoyful for us.

If we have talk about older time there is an no more like this oputunites which we have avail at this time.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.0

You give a clear general position in favour of the statement, saying, “Yes, I agree,” and provide relevant examples involving computers, navigation apps and AI tools. These examples show how technology offers people more ways to complete tasks. However, the response only partially addresses the question: it mainly describes useful technological opportunities rather than examining whether having too many choices can be overwhelming or disadvantageous. The examples are also asserted rather than explained in depth, and the comparison with the past is brief. The response is 29 words below the required minimum, which limits the space available to develop your reasons. To strengthen the answer, explain what “too many” choices means, consider a consequence of choice overload, and support your position with a fuller example.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0

There is some organisation: you state your view first, give examples of technology, then introduce personal experience and compare the present with the past. Phrases such as “If we have talk about older time” signal a shift to comparison. However, the overall progression is not consistently clear, and several ideas are repeated rather than developed. The opening mentions managing work digitally, which is then revisited through computers, the internet and AI without clear links between these points. Paragraphing is limited, while connectors such as “also,” “through” and “and etc.” are repetitive or do not show the precise relationship between ideas. Group related examples into paragraphs and use clearer transitions to distinguish your main reason, supporting examples and conclusion.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You use a basic range of topic-related vocabulary, including “navigation system,” “internet,” “assignment” and “application,” so the reader can identify the subject of your examples. However, the vocabulary is limited and several words or phrases are repeated, especially “opportunities,” “choices,” “things” and “helpful.” Frequent spelling and word-choice errors, including “beleive,” “oputunites” and “enjoyful,” sometimes make the message harder to follow. Some expressions are also unnatural, such as “a big source new technology” and “my father business stateges.” Aim to use more precise collocations and check spelling carefully. For example, describe the internet as a “source of information” and explain that technology “makes everyday tasks easier,” rather than relying on repeated general words.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

You attempt to connect ideas in longer sentences, for example when explaining that a navigation app helps people reach a destination. However, the range of sentence structures is limited, and attempts at complex sentences are often faulty. Errors in verb forms, agreement, articles and sentence construction occur throughout: “we have manage our work,” “This things were work by internet,” and “there is an no more like this” all require substantial grammatical correction. Punctuation and spacing are also inconsistent, as in “Yes,I” and “this.I.” These errors can make the reader pause to interpret your meaning. Practise accurate simple sentences first, then build longer sentences using clauses such as “because” and “which,” checking each verb against its subject and time reference.

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