Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-08-03
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
Nowadays, some individuals believe that we have several choices. I am strongly agree with this notion.
To commence with, there are several opportunities have been there for any adult, student or even teenager. Firstly, we talk about marriage proposals there are abundant online applications are available in which we can search our life partner with our personal suggestions. Secondly, if you gonna go abroad for higher education so we should apply online in multiple universities like many websites solve this problem we can apply all over the world at our home without any consultant its possible with cross threshold. Moreover, with the passage of time Artificial intelligence increases in robotics along with Chat Gpt at that application you can search your thesis, personal theory or any other doubt.
Furthermore, i am strongly agree with this notion Nowadays, we have several opportunities with multiple choices like i completed my bachelor in civil engineering and now my plan is to go abroad to purse my higher studies in Project management i can see many countries selected or universities selection its only because of the growth increasing in artificial intelligence or the effort of our scientists that creates a crucial role for our new generation. Similarly, in education system multiple courses are available for students like if you belong to a engineering background like an example of mine i am a civil engineer now my interest is in completed my master in relevant field. Similarly, i have a several options like project management, structural engineering, construction management, planning development, sustainable engineering, architectural engineering and many more.
In conclusion, predominantly individuals believed is right like nowadays people have many opportunities or choices in any sector we discuss in the whole essay.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The essay addresses the prompt by expressing a clear position, but the development of ideas is inconsistent. While you provide examples such as online dating and educational opportunities, the connection between these examples and the core argument—that we have 'too many' choices—is weak. You focus more on the existence of choices rather than the implications of having 'too many' (e.g., decision fatigue or anxiety). The response is somewhat repetitive, particularly in the second paragraph where you reiterate your personal background. To improve, ensure each paragraph directly supports the prompt's specific focus on the quantity of choices rather than just listing technological advancements.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The essay is organized into paragraphs, but the flow between and within them is often mechanical. You use basic cohesive devices like 'Firstly', 'Secondly', and 'Moreover', but these are sometimes used incorrectly or do not logically connect the ideas. For instance, the transition into the second paragraph is abrupt, and the concluding sentence is grammatically awkward and fails to summarize the main points effectively. Referencing is occasionally unclear, making it difficult for the reader to follow the progression of your argument. Improving the use of linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a clear topic sentence would significantly enhance coherence.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
Your vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but it lacks the precision and variety required for a higher band. You rely on simple, repetitive phrasing such as 'several opportunities', 'multiple choices', and 'many'. There are also issues with word choice and collocation, such as 'cross threshold' and 'pursue my higher studies' (should be 'pursue higher studies'). While you attempt to use topic-specific vocabulary like 'artificial intelligence' and 'structural engineering', the overall range is limited. To reach a higher band, focus on using more sophisticated synonyms and ensuring collocations are natural.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
There is a high frequency of grammatical errors throughout the essay, which occasionally impedes communication. Common issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'there are several opportunities have been there'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'i am strongly agree'), and sentence fragments or run-on sentences. You rely heavily on simple sentence structures, and attempts at more complex sentences often result in errors, such as 'if you gonna go abroad... so we should apply'. Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with capitalization of 'i' and 'Chat Gpt'. You need to focus on basic sentence construction and proofreading for subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.
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