Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-09-04
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.5)
In today's era , every individuals has numerous numbers to choose from which is perfect. In my opinion , i contribute that there are various benefits to this statement, but it also carries some drawback that some people may feel exist. However, the problem do not outweigh the advantages.
One of the primary advantages of having numerous options is the high level of personalization it offers. As in today market for each products people have options which perfectly shoots their needs.
The vast range of variety also help an individuals to control and satisfy their eagerness. However, if person choose the product which he like most from the options also help in memorability. For instance : if person buy a new smart phone he had an options to choose the number which likes the most which in result help for individual to memories and make easier to remember for friends, family.
On the other side, it also contribute to some drawbacks, as having to much choice in market for each and every products make individuals overwhelm in selecting. Additionally more choices also bring extra cost and extra steps to secure device. which in the end enhanced the overall cost of an products. And the most important factor is it waste individuals time and efforts and to much choices contributes to more struggle in selecting.
However, in my view i support that a limited range of option should be available in market which help person to choose the best one as per the need and demand.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.5
The response addresses the prompt by discussing the pros and cons of having many choices. However, the development of ideas is somewhat superficial. While you mention personalization and the burden of choice, the arguments lack depth and specific, well-explained examples. The example regarding smartphone numbers is slightly confusing and does not clearly illustrate the 'memorability' point. To improve, ensure that each main idea is supported by a clear, logical explanation rather than just stating the point. Your position is generally clear, but the conclusion introduces a new idea (a limited range of options) that could have been integrated more smoothly into the body paragraphs to strengthen your argument.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5
The essay is organized into paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the structure. However, the use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or inaccurate. For example, 'However' is used at the start of the final paragraph, but it does not effectively contrast with the previous paragraph. There are also issues with referencing; in the second paragraph, 'it' and 'which' are used in ways that make the connection between ideas unclear. The progression of ideas is sometimes disjointed, particularly in the transition between the benefits and the drawbacks. Improving the variety and accuracy of linking words will help the flow of your writing.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.5
The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task but lacks the precision and range required for higher bands. There are several instances of awkward word choices and collocations, such as 'numerous numbers to choose from' instead of 'numerous options' or 'choices'. Phrases like 'perfectly shoots their needs' (should be 'suits') and 'make individuals overwhelm' (should be 'overwhelmed') indicate a limited control over word forms and collocations. While the meaning is generally conveyed, the lack of sophisticated vocabulary and the presence of errors in word choice limit the score in this criterion.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
There is a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but the accuracy is inconsistent. You frequently struggle with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'every individuals has', 'the problem do not outweigh', 'each and every products'). There are also errors in article usage and pluralization, such as 'in today market' and 'an products'. Punctuation is also problematic, with unnecessary spaces before commas and periods. While the meaning is usually clear, the frequency of these grammatical errors is high enough to cause some distraction for the reader and prevents the essay from reaching a higher band.
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