Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-10-17

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

INTRODUCTION:

The statement says that few people believe that we have many choices in all things now a days .As we know that there are multiple choices in every field.In modern era there is vast variety of food,clothes, jobs.Moreover,we choose our favourite field in study according to our taste.

OVERVIEW:

I am strongly agree with this statement . When the time passes we become modern.Now our society turn in modern society.We have several options in food,jobs and clothes.On the other hand they have some negative things like we depend on machinery.Moreover,vast variety of food like fast food damage our health.

BODY:

In modern society,education is important and the way of success. We learn multiples of things in one time.As we know english is our national language and now it is important in every field like for communication.Moreover,we have multiple choices to learn the foreign languages and it helps us in communication or getting the best job opportunities.Whenever,we will going the foreign countries it helps us. Furthermore, some students have interest in computer so they choose their degree according to their taste.However, those students who interest in medical so they choose their degree according to their subjects.For instance,I have an interest in medical field.Moreover,I like to study the mental health so i choose psychology .

Moreover, we have many options in food some people like desi food and remaining like fast food.It depends on our taste.We have a vast variety in italian,desi and seafood.For example,I like to eat fast food like burger,pizza.It feel me calm,energetic and refresh my mind.On the other hand my parents like desi food .They like to eat biryani,mutton and beaf.So, we have also the ample amount of variety in food.

CONCLUSION:

As i mentioned, we have too many choices in every field. In conclusion we should thanked to ALLAH, because ALLAH gives us all this options.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5

You take a clear position in the conclusion, stating that there are “too many choices in every field,” and give relevant examples from education and food. The discussion of choosing languages or a degree, and the contrast between your food preferences and your parents’, show an attempt to support your view with personal examples. However, the position is not consistently expressed: the introduction says “few people believe” this, which does not clearly state your own view, and the education examples show variety without explaining why the choices are excessive. The response also briefly mentions machinery and health effects but does not develop these points. Explain more directly how having many options creates benefits or problems, and support each main reason with a clear explanation.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0

The response has a recognisable introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion, and the education and food examples are grouped into separate sections. This gives the reader some organisation. However, the progression is limited: the “OVERVIEW” repeats the introduction rather than establishing a distinct line of argument, and the body moves through several examples without clearly linking them to the claim that there are too many choices. Connectors such as “Moreover,” “Furthermore,” and “On the other hand” are repeated, sometimes where the relationship between ideas is not clear. For example, the contrast between studying English and choosing a medical degree needs a more explicit link. Use topic sentences to state each reason, then develop it in a logical sequence with clearer referencing.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You use a range of topic-related words, including “variety,” “communication,” “opportunities,” and “mental health,” and the reader can generally understand the examples. However, vocabulary is often repetitive, especially “multiple choices,” “many options,” and “vast variety,” and some combinations are unnatural or imprecise, such as “learn multiples of things in one time” and “ample amount of variety.” There are also word-form and spelling problems, including “now a days,” “beaf,” and “refresh my mind.” These errors sometimes make the intended meaning less clear. Build a more precise range for discussing choice, such as “a wide range of options,” “an abundance of alternatives,” and “decision-making,” and check spelling and collocations when editing.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

You attempt some longer sentences and use clauses to add examples, but the range is limited and complex structures are often inaccurate. Errors occur in basic sentence patterns, including “I am strongly agree,” “our society turn in modern society,” and “those students who interest in medical.” Verb forms and agreement also need attention, as in “we should thanked” and “It feel me calm.” Punctuation and sentence boundaries are inconsistent; for instance, several ideas run together after “Moreover” or “Whenever,” making relationships harder to follow. Practise forming accurate simple sentences first, then add subordinate clauses. Pay particular attention to subject–verb agreement, verb forms after modal verbs, articles, and punctuation between clauses.

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