Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-08-31

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today’s world subjects like Science and technology are more important than History.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example form your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

In contemporary societies, a large number of people encourage teaching History in schools, while others champion that subjects like Science and technology are more important than History. In my opinion, learning History can provide more understanding into today’s world. However, Science and technology is necessary for the present day improvement and future development. These points will be explained in the following paragraphs with relevant examples followed by a logical conclusion.

To begin with, the study of History is necessary as the past sets the foundation for the present day life. Individuals are able to properly understand how events came to be and ways of improving these events as a result of the study of the past. For example, the History of how the Independence of a nation came to be. Students are able to completely appreciate the Hero’s of the past and the legacy they laid.

Furthermore, Science and technology has become indispensable in today’s world, as technology has improved the quality of life, hence the necessity to study Science and technology related subjects, as this help to constantly improve the present day life. For example, the invention of mobile phones has made communication alot easier. With advances in Science and technology through diligent studies, more innovations with come into play and this will help to ensure a better future for this generation and the subsequent ones. In my opinion, studying Science subjects will help improve the overall living condition of humans and modify the future at large.

In conclusion, it is important to teach and learn Science and technology subjects in schools in order to improve the overall quality of life.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0

The response addresses both views and provides a clear personal opinion. However, the development of ideas is somewhat limited. While you mention the importance of history for understanding the past and science for future development, the arguments lack depth and specific, well-explained examples. For instance, the example regarding the 'Independence of a nation' is vague and does not clearly illustrate how history specifically helps solve modern problems. To reach a higher band, you should expand on your points with more detailed reasoning and concrete evidence, ensuring that your opinion is consistently supported throughout the essay rather than just stated in the introduction and conclusion.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.5

The essay is organized into logical paragraphs, and there is a clear progression of ideas. You use basic cohesive devices such as 'To begin with', 'Furthermore', and 'In conclusion' to signal the structure. However, the use of these devices is somewhat mechanical, and there is a lack of more sophisticated linking words or referencing to connect sentences more fluidly. The paragraphing is appropriate, but the transition between the discussion of history and the discussion of science could be smoother to create a more cohesive argument. Overall, the information is easy to follow, but the flow could be improved with more varied cohesive links.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.0

You demonstrate an adequate range of vocabulary for the task, using terms like 'contemporary societies', 'indispensable', and 'innovations'. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and collocation, such as 'champion that subjects' (should be 'argue that') and 'Hero’s of the past' (incorrect pluralization). There is also a tendency to repeat basic vocabulary like 'improve' and 'important'. To improve, try to incorporate more precise synonyms and collocations, and pay closer attention to word forms and pluralization to ensure your writing sounds more natural and professional.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

The essay contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While you attempt complex sentences, there are several grammatical errors, such as 'Science and technology is necessary' (subject-verb agreement error, as it should be 'are') and 'more innovations with come into play' (should be 'will'). Punctuation is generally acceptable, but there are minor errors like the unnecessary apostrophe in 'Hero’s'. The errors do not significantly impede communication, but they are frequent enough to prevent a higher score. Focusing on subject-verb agreement and consistent verb tense usage will help improve your accuracy.

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