Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 14 · 2026-08-11
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The bar chart details data about exports of a certain country in different categories between 2015 and 2016. The table chart illustrates the proportion in each category of exports in the year of 2016 rather than 2015 ( in billions ).
Overall, what stands out from the chart is that threre is the rate of export earnings in various strategies. The features of petroleum products was the most popular productivity while textiles was the least.
If we look at the details for petroleum products, this features went up from just over 60 billions to about 63 billions by 3 percentage. Regarding the trend for egnineered goods, it was approximately 66 in 2015 and it increased to around 62 in the last year. As for gems and jewellery, this trend was higher in the first year in comparison with in 2016.
Lokking at the tdetails for agriculture products this trend was approximately equal during this period by 0.81%. Finally , textiles was uncommon, but it grew just over 31.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
Javob topshiriqni bajarishga urinadi, ammo ma'lumotlarni aniq yetkazib bera olmaydi. Umumiy sharh noaniq va asosiy tendensiyalarni samarali ajratib ko'rsata olmaydi. Ma'lumotlarni talqin qilishda jiddiy xatoliklar mavjud; masalan, engineered goods 66 dan 62 ga oshdi deb aytish qarama-qarshilikdir. Bundan tashqari, toifalarning tavsifi tushunarsiz va ustunli diagramma (qiymatlar) hamda jadval (foiz o'zgarishi) o'rtasidagi bog'liqlik aniq tushuntirilmagan. Yaxshilash uchun keltirilgan raqamlar taqdim etilgan ma'lumotlarga aynan mos kelishiga va umumiy sharh shunchaki toifalarni sanab o'tmasdan, eng muhim tendensiyalarni aniqlashiga ishonch hosil qilishingiz kerak.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5
Insho xatboshilarga ajratilgan, ammo mantiqiy ketma-ketlik kuchsiz. 'Overall' va 'Regarding' kabi bog'lovchi vositalardan foydalanishga urinish bo'lsa-da, gaplar o'rtasidagi o'tishlar ko'pincha uzuq-yuluq. Havolalar ba'zan noaniq, bu esa o'quvchiga ikki yil o'rtasidagi taqqoslashni kuzatib borishni qiyinlashtiradi. Xatboshilar mavjud, ammo ularning ichki tuzilmasi aniq yo'nalishga ega emas, chunki ma'lumotlar biroz parchalangan holda taqdim etilgan. Bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalanishni yaxshilash va har bir xatboshi aniq mavzu gapiga ega bo'lishini ta'minlash matn ravonligini oshiradi.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
Lug'at boyligi cheklangan va takroriy. 'most popular productivity' va 'this features went up' kabi noaniq so'z tanlash holatlari bir necha bor uchraydi. 'egnineered' va 'Lokking' kabi imloviy xatolar yaqqol ko'zga tashlanadi. Ishlatilgan lug'at odatda oddiy va yuqori ball uchun talab qilinadigan moslashuvchanlikni namoyish etmaydi. Yaxshilash uchun ma'lumotlarni tasvirlashga oid 'fluctuated', 'remained stable' yoki 'experienced a marginal increase' kabi aniqroq terminlardan foydalanishga e'tibor qarating va oddiy imloviy xatolarni yo'qotish uchun ishingizni qayta tekshirib chiqing.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
Javob oddiy va murakkab tuzilmalarning aralashmasini o'z ichiga oladi, ammo tez-tez uchraydigan grammatik xatolar ba'zan tushunarlilikka xalaqit beradi. Bunga 'threre is the rate of export earnings' va 'in comparison with in 2016' misol bo'la oladi. Ega va kesimning moslashuvi hamda ko'makchilardan foydalanish matn davomida nomutanosib. Garchi ma'no umuman olganda tushunarli bo'lsa-da, oddiy gap qurilishidagi xatolarning yuqori chastotasi javobning yuqoriroq ball olishiga to'sqinlik qiladi. Gap tuzilishi, to'g'ri fe'l zamonlari va izchil tinish belgilariga e'tibor qaratish aniqligingizni oshirishga yordam beradi.
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