Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 18 · 2026-08-03
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
People have different opinions on whether students should learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. While some argue that it is more important to focus on studying for a qualification. I believe that learning diffenrent fields in university is more reasonable because in this way gives students more chances in the future.
On the one hand, it is ture that focusing on one subjects has certain merits. Firstly, giving more attention to studying for a qualification improves the rate of gratuation. For instances, part of students have no efforts to totally absorb knowledge at same time, then they may fail their own study, and can not graduate. However,
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 4.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 4.0
该文章仅有111字，远低于250字的最低要求，未能满足任务要求。因此，题目仅得到了部分回应。虽然你引入了话题并陈述了立场，但观点的展开严重不足。你开始讨论专注于单一学科的优点，但文章在未能充分探讨对立观点或提供必要的支持性例子之前就戛然而止。为了提高，你必须用具体的例子扩展你的论点，并确保回应题目要求的所有部分，包括一个清晰的结论，以达到必要的字数。
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
这篇文章在逻辑组织上进行了基础尝试，使用了如 'On the one hand' 和 'Firstly' 等衔接词。然而，由于文章不完整，整体缺乏逻辑推进或清晰的段落结构。突然的结尾阻碍了连贯论点的形成。为了提高，你应该确保每个段落都有清晰的主题句，并使用更多样化的连接词，使你的观点在整篇文章中衔接得更加流畅。
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
词汇量对于基本交流来说大致足够，但缺乏更高分数段所要求的广度和精确度。文中存在一些错误，例如 'gratuation' (graduation) 以及 'no efforts to totally absorb'（这是一种不自然的搭配）。你过多依赖简单的表达，如 'learning different fields'。为了提高，请专注于使用更地道的学术搭配并确保拼写准确。扩展与教育和职业发展相关的词汇量将有助于你更精确地表达观点。
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
文章混合使用了简单句和一些尝试性的复杂句，但频繁的错误有时会影响理解。例如，'in this way gives students' 在语法上是不正确的，而 'part of students have no efforts' 则显得生硬且不清晰。文中还存在标点符号问题，例如句子碎片 'While some argue that it is more important to focus on studying for a qualification.'。为了提高，请专注于主谓一致和句子结构，确保每个句子都有明确的主语和谓语。
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