Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 11 · 2026-08-28
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 7.5)
The table and pie charts provide data on visitor numbers and satisfaction levels at Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment.
Overall, it’s evident that both the total number of visitors and overall customer satisfaction significantly increased after the museum’s renovation. Notably, the proportion of dissatisfied visitors decreased substantially during the same period.
According to the table, the total number of visitors rose from 74,000 in the year before the refurbishment to 92,000 in the year after the changes.
Regarding visitor feedback, satisfaction levels improved considerably after the redevelopment. Before the refurbishment, only 15% of visitors reported being “very satisfied,” while 30% were “satisfied.” After the renovation, the former figure more than doubled to 35%, and the proportion of satisfied visitors rose to 40%, resulting in a combined 75% positive feedback rating.
Conversely, negative experiences declined. The percentage of “dissatisfied” visitors fell from 40% to 15%, while those who were “very dissatisfied” dropped slightly from 10% to 5%. The proportion of people who gave no response remained unchanged at 5% in both years.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
You have successfully addressed all parts of the task. The response provides a clear overview of the data, highlighting the main trends in visitor numbers and satisfaction levels. You have effectively selected key features, such as the increase in total visitors from 74,000 to 92,000 and the shift in satisfaction percentages. Comparisons between the two periods are made clearly and accurately. The information is well-supported by the data provided, and the summary is concise and relevant. You have fully met the requirements for an Academic Task 1 response by reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons throughout the text.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The response is logically organized with a clear progression of ideas. Each paragraph serves a specific purpose: the introduction sets the context, the overview summarizes the main trends, and the subsequent paragraphs detail the specific data points. You have used cohesive devices such as 'Notably,' 'According to the table,' 'Regarding,' and 'Conversely' effectively to guide the reader through the information. The paragraphing is appropriate, and the flow between sentences is smooth, ensuring that the information is easy to follow and understand. The structure is coherent and professional.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.0
You have demonstrated a good range of vocabulary appropriate for an academic report. Phrases such as 'significantly increased,' 'proportion of dissatisfied visitors,' 'more than doubled,' and 'negative experiences declined' show a good level of precision. The vocabulary is used naturally and accurately to describe the trends in the data. While the range is sufficient and effective, incorporating a few more sophisticated synonyms for 'increased' or 'decreased' could further enhance the lexical variety. Overall, the language is precise and contributes to a clear and professional tone throughout the response.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The response displays a high level of grammatical accuracy. You have used a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, effectively. Punctuation is used correctly, and there are no significant errors that impede communication. The control over tense and subject-verb agreement is consistent throughout the text. The majority of your sentences are error-free, and the few structures used are handled with confidence. The clarity of your writing is a testament to your strong grasp of English grammar, making the report easy to read and interpret.
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