Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 11 · 2026-10-06

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies, individuals or government?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

Nowadays, every morning came up with new findings in each industries. While, most of them funded br private company. The government is also helpful for researchers to provide required documents and valubel material. In my point of view the private organization must prefearabel for funding on medical research. Because of that, workforce get better opertunities.

The private veantures provide better facilitys to there employes and it also help them to work efficently. While, they must relies on multipel partners and workers get free environment under them. Moreover, due to the project is funded by privet companies, at that time researchers have more flexibilty. With this privent venture is take hug risk and with that, when project complete sucsessfully origanization make hug profit.

However, the project goes under any individuals at that tiime it face financiel crises. Although, whne it goes under govenrment then its take time to complete. There is required many guidlines need to follows and proffassionals not fill free. Some people argue, that having authorities of this kind of research must be under government. But, due to this many people have great idea but never get appreciation from anothers. In between we lost gem. So I personally belives, having authories to the privet compnay is more benificeal for over contries growth.

In conclution, the people belives to having autories to government it more secure but its may delay work and not get more flexibely for researchers but having involment of privet authories it more convineant to fats growth of nation resarch.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5

The response addresses the prompt by expressing an opinion that medical research should be funded by private companies, touching upon comparisons with government and individual funding. However, the ideas remain limited and under-developed. For instance, the mention that workforce gets better opportunities or that organizations make a huge profit when a project successfully completes lacks detailed elaboration or concrete examples. The position is discernible, but the overall development is constrained by brevity and a lack of depth in exploring the different funding sources.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.5

There is some organisation visible through the basic paragraph structure, and the text attempts to use cohesive devices such as 'While', 'Moreover', and 'However'. However, there is no clear overall progression throughout the text, and referencing is sometimes unclear, such as the ambiguous pronoun use in 'due to the project is funded by privet companies, at that time researchers have more flexibilty'. Cohesive devices are occasionally inaccurate or repetitive, making the logical flow disjointed at times.

Lexical Resource: Band 4.5

The vocabulary range is limited and minimally adequate for addressing the topic. There are noticeable errors in spelling, word form, and word choice throughout the text, such as 'industries' instead of 'industry', 'br' for 'by', 'valubel' for 'valuable', 'prefearabel' for 'preferable', 'veantures' for 'ventures', 'facilitys' for 'facilities', 'reiles' for 'rely', 'privet' for 'private', 'sucsessfully' for 'successfully', 'origanization' for 'organization', 'financiel' for 'financial', 'proffassionals' for 'professionals', 'contries' for 'countries', 'conclution' for 'conclusion', and 'autories' for 'authorities'. These errors cause some difficulty for the reader and impede smooth communication.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 4.5

The text displays a very limited range of structures, mostly relying on simple sentences or attempts at complex sentences that are frequently faulty. There are frequent grammatical errors in verb forms, tenses, subject-verb agreement, and prepositions, such as 'Nowadays, every morning came up with new findings', 'While, most of them funded br private company', 'The government is also helpful for researchers to provide', 'due to the project is funded', 'when project complete sucsessfully', 'the project goes under any individuals at that tiime it face', and 'its may delay work'. These frequent errors cause difficulty for the reader.

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