Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 18 · 2026-08-14

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Central Library 20 years ago

Student answer (Band 5.5)

The diagram depicts the information on the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and a recent one.

First of all, the interior of library while entering is vastly changed as the section of reading room and enquiry desk has been replaced now with a computer room and a cafe where the readers or visitors can take a break while spending their time on library hours. On middle of library, tables and chairs is now completely removed. Likewise, Adult fiction books is now been replaced with a reference books where the readers can utilized only during a library time.

On the other hand, Adult non-fiction books is also been replaced with adult fiction books, information desk and a self service machines. Also, CDs, videos, computer games is now completely interchanged with a storytelling events and a children fiction books which helps them to built their confidence and self-esteem.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.5

The response covers the main features of the floor plan changes, such as the replacement of the reading room and the rearrangement of book sections. However, the overview is missing; a summary of the most significant changes (e.g., the library becoming more modern and service-oriented) is essential for a higher band. While the key areas are identified, the description of the 'middle of the library' is slightly vague, and the report lacks a clear, cohesive summary of the overall transformation. To improve, ensure you include a clear overview paragraph that highlights the general trend of the changes observed between the two time periods.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5

The response is organized into paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the changes. However, the use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical and repetitive. Phrases like 'First of all' and 'On the other hand' are used, but the transition between ideas could be smoother. Additionally, the referencing is occasionally unclear; for example, 'the interior of library while entering' is awkward phrasing that disrupts the flow. Improving the variety of linking words and ensuring that each paragraph has a clear thematic focus would enhance the logical progression of the report.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.0

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, allowing the reader to understand the changes described. However, there are several instances of imprecise word choice and minor errors, such as 'utilized only during a library time' and 'built their confidence'. The range of vocabulary is somewhat limited, relying on basic descriptors. To reach a higher band, you should aim to use more precise terminology related to floor plans and spatial changes, such as 'relocated', 'converted', 'expanded', or 'designated area', rather than repeating 'replaced' multiple times.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0

The response contains a mix of simple and some complex structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors that occasionally distract the reader. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('tables and chairs is now completely removed') and incorrect verb forms ('Adult fiction books is now been replaced'). There are also missing articles ('the' library, 'a' reference books). While these errors do not completely impede communication, they are frequent enough to prevent a higher score. Focusing on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of passive voice constructions will significantly improve the accuracy of your writing.

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