Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 18 · 2026-08-19

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Central Library 20 years ago

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The two diagrams depicts how the public library evolved over a period of 20 years.

Overall, the public library has been completely transformed with new technologies introduced and nothing looks similar except the layout of the floor.

Central library 20 years ago, is divided into six different rooms. As you entre the library you will find tables and chairs were people can wait or sit. On the right side of the floor as you entre first you will see enquiry desk were people can return books or buy tickets. As you pass that there is adult non-fiction book area and going forward last room is children's books area. On the left side reading room, adult fiction books and CDs, video, computer games etc.

Central library today, as you enter you will see cafe on your right followed by information desk and adult fiction room. After that lecture room which is used to be children's room. On the right side, computer room and that adult fiction room and the last room in that row is storytelling and children fiction books also you can find sofas in that room were you can sit and relax.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0

You have successfully identified the main features of the library floor plans and provided a clear overview of the changes. You covered the transformation of the layout and the introduction of new facilities. However, the response lacks precise comparisons. For example, you mention the 'lecture room' replaced the 'children's room', which is good, but you could have more clearly contrasted the locations of specific areas (e.g., noting that the reading room was replaced by the computer room). To reach a higher band, ensure you explicitly compare the spatial shifts rather than just listing the rooms in each diagram separately.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The response is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs for each time period. However, the use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical and repetitive, relying heavily on 'as you enter' and 'on the right/left side'. The transition between the two time periods could be smoother. While the paragraphing is appropriate, the flow between sentences within paragraphs feels a bit list-like rather than analytical. Improving the variety of linking words and referencing would help the text read more naturally.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.0

You have a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the floor plan, such as 'transformed', 'evolved', and 'facilities'. However, there are several spelling and word-choice errors, such as 'entre' (enter), 'were' (where), and 'used to be' (which used to be). These errors are noticeable but do not impede overall communication. To improve, focus on using more precise descriptive language for spatial relationships and ensure accurate spelling of common verbs and relative pronouns.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5

The response uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are several grammatical inaccuracies, such as 'The two diagrams depicts' (subject-verb agreement error) and 'which is used to be' (incorrect passive voice construction). Additionally, there are punctuation issues, such as missing commas after introductory phrases. While you attempt to use complex structures, the frequency of errors is high enough to prevent a higher score. Focusing on subject-verb agreement and consistent tense usage (past vs. present) will significantly improve your accuracy.

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