Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 18 · 2026-08-23
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Central Library 20 years ago
Student answer (Band 6.0)
The floor plans illustrate how central library changed in 2 decades.
Overall, it is evident that, the area underwent substantial redevelopment, with information desk alongside with self-service machines being added, while tables and chair at the centre got completely removed.
To begin with, CDs, videos and computer games room on the top left of the map got completely replaced
with area for storytelling events and children's fiction books. Moreover, area for adults's on-fiction books got complete renovation and adult's fiction books with information desk and self-service machines were added. Additionally, reading room for newspaper and magazines got extensively reconstructed that introduced a new computer room.
Furthermore, the space formerly dedicated to adult fiction has been repurposed for reference books. The information counter has been relocated to accommodate a new cafe new entrance. Finally, over the course of 2 decades, the seating arrangement-consisting of the original chairs and tables at the centre was gradually phased out until it was completely removed from the space.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 6.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 6.0 |
| Overall | 6.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0
The response successfully identifies the main features of the library floor plan changes. You have provided a clear overview and highlighted key transformations, such as the addition of the information desk and the removal of central seating. However, the report could be improved by ensuring all changes are accurately attributed to their specific locations. For instance, the description of the 'adult's fiction' area is slightly confusing, and the mention of a 'cafe' appears in the final paragraph without being clearly linked to the visual evidence. To reach a higher band, ensure that every detail mentioned is clearly supported by the provided diagram.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0
The essay is logically organized into paragraphs, with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. You use cohesive devices such as 'To begin with', 'Moreover', and 'Furthermore' to guide the reader through the changes. However, some transitions feel slightly mechanical, and the referencing is occasionally unclear, such as the sudden mention of a 'cafe' in the final paragraph. Improving the flow between sentences and ensuring that each paragraph has a distinct thematic focus would enhance the overall coherence of the response.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.0
You demonstrate an adequate range of vocabulary for the task, using terms like 'redevelopment', 'repurposed', and 'phased out' appropriately. There are some minor errors in word formation and spelling, such as 'on-fiction' instead of 'non-fiction' and 'adult's' used incorrectly as a possessive in some contexts. While the vocabulary is sufficient to convey your meaning, incorporating more precise collocations related to spatial changes—such as 'transformed into', 'converted to', or 'superseded by'—would elevate the lexical quality of your writing.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0
The response uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While the meaning is generally clear, there are several grammatical inaccuracies, particularly with articles ('the area underwent substantial redevelopment') and possessive apostrophes ('adult's on-fiction'). Additionally, some phrasing is slightly awkward, such as 'alongside with'. To improve, focus on consistent article usage and refining your control over complex sentence structures. Despite these errors, the grammar does not impede communication, and the majority of your sentences are understandable.
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