Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-14
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The provided line graph delineates data regarting the changes in the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island over a seven period spanning from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, it is immedeately salient that total experienced a remarkable upward trend, whereas the converse was true for visitors staying on island, which witnessed a steady increase throughout the timescale. Additionally, the most dramatic growth was registered in 2010 to 2017.
In terms of the detailed statistics, total commenced at approximately 1 million in 2010 and subsequently surged dramatically to reach a peak of 3.5 million in 2017. Following this exponential growth, the figures plateuated consistently at this high level for the remainder of the period.
By striking contrast, visitors staying on cruise ships followed a completely inverted trajectory. The data increased significantly from 0.3 million in 2010, before hitting a rock-bottom of merely 2 million. Thereafter, this category experienced wild fluctuations until the final year.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
Javob grafikning asosiy xususiyatlarini qamrab oladi, ammo ma’lumotlarni taqdim etishda jiddiy noaniqliklar mavjud. Masalan, siz jami ko‘rsatkich 3,5 millionga yetganini va barqarorlashganini ta’kidlaysiz, bu esa taqdim etilgan grafikda o‘z aksini topmagan. Bundan tashqari, kruiz kemasi tashrif buyuruvchilari haqidagi tavsivingiz vizual ma’lumotlarga ko‘ra faktik jihatdan noto‘g‘ri, chunki siz 'rock-bottom of 2 million' va 'wild fluctuations' haqida gapirasiz, bular esa grafikdagi barqaror tendensiyaga mos kelmaydi. Garchi siz tendensiyalarni aniqlashga harakat qilsangiz ham, ma’lumotlar nuqtalarini noto‘g‘ri talqin qilish yuqoriroq ball olishingizga to‘sqinlik qiladi. Yaxshilash uchun yozishdan oldin raqamlarni o‘qlar bilan diqqat bilan solishtirib ko‘ring.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5
Insho mantiqiy xatboshilarga bo‘lingan bo‘lib, kirish, umumiy xulosa va ikkita asosiy xatboshidan iborat. Fikrlarni bog‘lash uchun 'In terms of,' 'By striking contrast,' va 'Thereafter' kabi bog‘lovchi vositalardan foydalanasiz. Biroq, mantiqiy rivojlanish 'task achievement' qismida aytib o‘tilgan faktik noaniqliklar tufayli susaygan, bu esa taqqoslashni o‘quvchi uchun tushunarsiz qiladi. Xatboshilarga ajratish o‘rinli va jumlalar o‘rtasidagi bog‘liqlik odatda ravon, ammo ma’lumotlarni taqdim etishning ichki mantiqiy ketma-ketligi yuqoriroq ball olish uchun aniqroq bo‘lishi kerak.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
Siz 'delineates,' 'exponential growth,' va 'inverted trajectory' kabi atamalarni o‘z ichiga olgan maqbul darajadagi lug‘at boyligini namoyish etasiz. Biroq, 'regarting,' 'immedeately,' va 'plateuated' kabi bir nechta imlo xatolari mavjud. Bundan tashqari, ba’zi so‘z tanlovlari kontekstda biroz noqulay yoki noto‘g‘ri ishlatilgan, masalan, 'total experienced' (ot yetishmayapti, masalan, 'the total number') va 'staying on island' (artikl yetishmayapti). Garchi siz murakkabroq tildan foydalanishga harakat qilsangiz ham, imlo va kollokatsiya xatolarining ko‘pligi ballingizni cheklaydi.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
Siz kirish jumlasidagi va ikkinchi xatboshidagi qarama-qarshi tuzilma kabi oddiy va murakkab gap tuzilmalaridan aralashtirib foydalanasiz. Biroq, tez-tez uchraydigan grammatik xatolar mavjud, jumladan, tushirib qoldirilgan artikllar ('staying on island'), ega va kesimning moslashuvi bilan bog‘liq muammolar va noqulay iboralar ('total experienced a remarkable upward trend'). Tinish belgilari odatda maqbul, ammo grammatik xatolar matn davomida sezilib turadi. Yaxshilash uchun asosiy artikllarni tekshirishga va jumlalaringizda otlar aniq belgilanganligiga ishonch hosil qilishga e’tibor qarating.
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