Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-14
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.5)
The provided line graph delineates data regarting the changes in the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island over a seven period spanning from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, it is immedeately salient that total experienced a remarkable upward trend, whereas the converse was true for visitors staying on island, which witnessed a steady increase throughout the timescale. Additionally, the most dramatic growth was registered in 2010 to 2017.
In terms of the detailed statistics, total commenced at approximately 1 million in 2010 and subsequently surged dramatically to reach a peak of 3.5 million in 2017. Following this exponential growth, the figures plateuated consistently at this high level for the remainder of the period.
By striking contrast, visitors staying on cruise ships followed a completely inverted trajectory. The data increased significantly from 0.3 million in 2010, before hitting a rock-bottom of merely 2 million. Thereafter, this category experienced wild fluctuations until the final year. Similarly, visitors staying on island started at 0.7 million and then jumped 2 million over the period.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.5 |
| Overall | 5.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
Javobingiz grafikning asosiy xususiyatlarini qamrab oladi va umumiy tashrif buyuruvchilar hamda ikkita kichik toifa uchun umumiy tendensiyalarni aniqlaydi. Biroq, ma'lumotlarni taqdim etishda jiddiy noaniqliklar mavjud. Masalan, siz kruiz kemasi yo'lovchilari 'rock-bottom of merely 2 million'ga yetganini va orolda qoluvchilar 'jumped 2 million'ga oshganini yozgansiz, bu esa taqdim etilgan vizual ma'lumotlarga zid keladi. Bundan tashqari, umumiy sharh biroz chalkash, chunki u orolda qoluvchilar uchun 'steady increase'ni qayd etib, bir vaqtning o'zida umumiy ko'rsatkich uchun 'dramatic growth'ni ta'kidlaydi. Yaxshilash uchun keltirilgan raqamlar grafik o'qlari bilan aniq mos kelishiga va xulosangiz qarama-qarshi bayonotlarsiz turli toifalarni aniq ajratib ko'rsatishiga ishonch hosil qiling.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0
Insho mantiqiy jihatdan kirish, umumiy sharh va ikkita asosiy xatboshiga bo'lingan. Siz ma'lumotlar bo'ylab o'quvchini yo'naltirish uchun 'In terms of', 'By striking contrast' va 'Thereafter' kabi bog'lovchi vositalardan foydalanasiz. Biroq, fikrlarning rivojlanishiga ba'zan noto'g'ri ma'lumotlar talqini to'sqinlik qiladi, bu esa taqqoslashni chalkashtirib yuboradi. Xatboshilarga ajratish tashrif buyuruvchilarning turli toifalarini ajratish uchun o'rinli qo'llanilgan. Yuqoriroq bandga erishish uchun mantiqiy oqim aniq ma'lumotlar bilan qo'llab-quvvatlanishiga e'tibor qarating, chunki hozirgi nomuvofiqliklar umumiy argumentni uzuq-yuluq qilib ko'rsatmoqda.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.5
Siz 'delineates', 'salient', 'exponential' va 'inverted trajectory' kabi so'zlarni ishlatib, boy lug'at zaxirasini namoyish etasiz. Biroq, 'regarting', 'immedeately' va 'plateuated' kabi bir nechta imlo xatolari mavjud. Bundan tashqari, ba'zi so'z tanlovlari biroz noqulay yoki noto'g'ri ishlatilgan, masalan, 'total experienced' (ot yetishmayapti, masalan, 'the total number') va 'rock-bottom of 2 million' (bu yuqori ko'rsatkich, eng past nuqta emas). Murakkab tildan foydalanishga urinishingizga qaramay, imlo va kollokatsiya xatolarining ko'pligi ballingizni cheklaydi. Imlo xatolarini tekshirishga va tasvirlovchi sifatlaringiz ma'lumotlarning raqamli haqiqatiga mos kelishiga e'tibor qarating.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5
Inshoda 'The data increased significantly from 0.3 million in 2010, before hitting a rock-bottom...' kabi oddiy va murakkab gap tuzilmalari aralashmasidan foydalanilgan. Xilma-xillikka intilish bo'lsa-da, 'over a seven period' ('year' so'zi tushib qolgan), 'total experienced' (ega tushib qolgan) va 'staying on island' ('the' artikli tushib qolgan) kabi bir nechta grammatik xatolar mavjud. Bu xatolar tez-tez uchraydi, lekin odatda muloqotga to'sqinlik qilmaydi. Yaxshilash uchun artikllardan foydalanishga va har bir gap bo'lagida ega va kesim aniq belgilanganligiga ko'proq e'tibor bering.
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