Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-14
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.5)
The provided line graph delineates data regarding the changes in the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island over a seven-year period spanning from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, it is immediately salient that total experienced a remarkable upward trend, whereas the converse was true for visitors staying on island, which witnessed a steady increase throughout the timescale. Additionally, the most dramatic growth was registered in 2010 to 2017.
In terms of the detailed statistics, total commenced at approximately 1 million in 2010 and subsequently surged dramatically to reach a peak of 3.5 million in 2017. Following this exponential growth, the figures plateaued consistently at this high level for the remainder of the period.
By striking contrast, visitors staying on cruise ships followed a completely inverted trajectory. The data increased significantly from 0.3 million in 2010, before hitting a rock-bottom of merely 2 million. Thereafter, this category experienced wild fluctuations until the final year. Similarly, visitors staying on island started at 0.7 and then jumped to 2 million over the period.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 6.0 |
| Overall | 5.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
Javobingiz grafikdagi asosiy xususiyatlarni qamrab olgan, ammo ma'lumotlarni talqin qilishda jiddiy noaniqliklar mavjud. Siz tashrif buyuruvchilarning umumiy soni 3.5 millionga yetganini ta'kidlaysiz, biroq grafikda eng yuqori ko'rsatkich 3 million ekanligi ko'rsatilgan. Bundan tashqari, kruiz kemasi yo'lovchilari haqidagi tavsifingiz faktik jihatdan noto'g'ri; siz 'rock-bottom of 2 million' va 'wild fluctuations' iboralarini ishlatgansiz, bular taqdim etilgan ma'lumotlar bilan tasdiqlanmaydi. Trendlarni aniqlashga harakat qilgan bo'lsangiz-da, raqamlarni noto'g'ri o'qish topshiriq bajarilishiga salbiy ta'sir ko'rsatadi. Yaxshilash uchun, yozma xulosangizni vizual ma'lumotlar bilan diqqat bilan solishtirib ko'ring, chunki Task 1 topshirig'ida aniqlik eng muhim omildir.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5
Insho mantiqiy jihatdan kirish, umumiy sharh va ikkita asosiy qismga bo'lingan. Fikrlarni bog'lash uchun 'In terms of,' 'By striking contrast,' va 'Following this exponential growth' kabi bog'lovchi vositalardan foydalangansiz. Biroq, fikrlar rivoji topshiriq bajarilishi qismida aytib o'tilgan faktik xatolar tufayli to'sqinlikka uchraydi. Xatboshilarga ajratish o'rinli va umumiy tuzilma aniq, ammo ma'lumotlarning noto'g'ri talqin qilinishi tufayli axborotning ichki izchilligi zaif. Ma'lumot nuqtalarining aniqligini oshirish tabiiy ravishda axborotning yanada izchil va mantiqiy oqimiga olib keladi.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.5
Siz 'delineates,' 'salient,' 'exponential growth,' va 'inverted trajectory' kabi atamalarni ishlatib, yaxshi lug'at boyligini namoyish etasiz. Bular murakkabroq tildan foydalanishga urinishni ko'rsatadi. Biroq, kollokatsiya va aniqlik bilan bog'liq ba'zi muammolar mavjud, masalan, 'total experienced a remarkable upward trend' (ot yetishmayapti, masalan, 'the total number of visitors') va 'hitting a rock-bottom of merely 2 million.' Ikkinchisi kuchli iborani noto'g'ri ishlatishga misoldir, chunki grafik kontekstida 2 million 'rock-bottom' hisoblanmaydi. Ma'lumotlar trendlarini aniq aks ettiruvchi lug'atdan foydalanishga e'tibor qarating.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0
Siz 'The provided line graph delineates data regarding the changes...' va 'Following this exponential growth, the figures plateaued...' kabi sodda va murakkab gap tuzilmalarini aralashtirib ishlatgansiz. 'total experienced' (artikl yetishmayapti) va 'from 2010 to 2017' (o'sish davriga ishora qilganda) kabi ba'zi grammatik xatolar mavjud. Biroq, bu xatolar muloqotga to'sqinlik qilmaydi. Tinish belgilaridan foydalanish mahoratingiz odatda yaxshi va gaplar xilma-xilligi ushbu topshiriq uchun yetarli. Yuqoriroq band balliga erishish uchun artikllar va ega-kesim moslashuvining doimiy ravishda to'g'ri bo'lishiga e'tibor qarating.
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