Band 6.5 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 6.5 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-09-02
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Student answer (Band 6.5)
Many people believe that in the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying. I partially agree with this view because online sources provide greater convenience and instant updates, but at the same time due to online sources, people may lose their reading habit from physical books and may increase the risk of eye problems.
On the one hand, online sources provide greater convenience. This is because news on apps or websites is accessible 24 hours. For example, if a person has a busy schedule during the day, they may use an app to read news at night without carrying a physical newspaper. People can read about various news topics at anytime and anywhere. Therefore, online sources are more convenient than physical newspapers. Additionally, online broadcasts provide instant updates about the news. The newspapers get updated on daily basis, but online sources get updated within a few hours. For instance, if a disaster occurs in a particular state, people may get updates of it on the next day through newspapers. However, online sources help to spread this news within a few hours. In addition, online sources can be beneficial for those with a lower salary. Individuals who cannot afford to buy books, may use online sources without paying, just with the help of the internet.
On the other hand, there are certain drawbacks to consider. Firstly, people may lose their physical book reading habit by relying only on online sources. Younger generations may not develop a book reading habit and may require electronic devices such as mobile phones or laptops to do their studies. The children may misuse these devices by playing games or wasting time on the unproductive things. Secondly, reading from screens can be dangerous for eyes. The screens of the electronic devices release a huge amount of harmful rays, which can become a treat for eyes. If a person frequently uses screen for reading news, they may increase a chance of getting specs at a younger age.
In conclusion, I partially agree that in the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because of online sources. Although online sources provide greater convenience and instant updates, it can also create challenges such as loss reading habit and affects the eyes. A balanced approach works best where online sources should continue to grow, while physical newspapers and books should exist alongside.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 6.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 6.0 |
| Overall | 6.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.5
You have addressed all parts of the prompt by providing a clear position and supporting it with relevant arguments. You balanced the convenience of online media against the drawbacks of physical book loss and health concerns. The ideas are generally well-developed, though the argument regarding 'lower salary' individuals could be further refined, as the cost of devices and internet access is also a factor. Overall, your position is consistent throughout the essay, and you have provided a balanced view that directly answers the 'to what extent' aspect of the prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.5
The essay is logically organized with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. You use cohesive devices such as 'On the one hand', 'Additionally', 'For instance', and 'In conclusion' effectively to guide the reader. Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate distinct ideas. However, some transitions are slightly mechanical, and the flow between sentences could be improved by using more varied referencing. For example, the link between the 'lower salary' point and the rest of the paragraph could be smoother. Overall, the progression of ideas is clear and easy to follow.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.0
You demonstrate a sufficient range of vocabulary to discuss the topic with some precision. Phrases like 'instant updates', 'busy schedule', and 'balanced approach' are used correctly. There are some minor inaccuracies, such as 'treat for eyes' (should be 'threat') and 'get specs' (which is informal). While you attempt to use less common vocabulary, there is room for more sophisticated collocations and academic phrasing to reach a higher band. The vocabulary is adequate for the task and does not impede communication.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0
You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While many sentences are error-free, there are recurring grammatical slips, such as 'they will able to' (missing 'be'), 'updated on daily basis' (missing 'a'), and 'loss reading habit' (should be 'loss of reading habit'). Punctuation is generally accurate, but these minor errors in articles and verb forms persist. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles in academic writing. The errors do not impede meaning, but they prevent the essay from reaching the higher bands.
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