Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-10-29

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

introduction,

in this eassy i will discussing the both point of viewabout the aversiting. and also share my opinion. on this topic

OVERALL,

in our country people think that the adverisiting is sucessfull because when any company or brand. give the adversiting about any his thinks like some company and brands promote. there products to attract the people. company and brands take the adversiting in streets and also through the adversiting page. in the home to give the 30 to 50 % discount on his product. and brands also promote their products in adds, socialmedia sites, etc to promote it. when people see the discount on the product the huge amount of the people visit the website of the brand or company. to visit it and purchase his favourite product. and the brands can also provide deals on this product. and some people also visit the brands shopes or company to buy it so it is possible with the help of adversiting.

OTHER PEOPLE POINT OF VIEW.

some people dont beleive in the adversiting and don"t interest in this type of favour because some webste or fake and cheat the people. so some people dont purchase the product. and the main point is in this time. brands and company promote their product in social media sites because it is free and dont the waste of money. in our country. when the adversitings pages are past in any wall on road people can tears the pages and through it on dustbine. so adversitings are not sucessfull at this time it is waste of time and money.

MY OPINION;

with my prospective. the adversitings is a well because its increase the coustomers beleive about products and it is well because some people also prefere to buy things online from website.so this is also help full for all people.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.0

You discuss both views and give a personal opinion, so the response addresses the main parts of the prompt. The first view is illustrated with discounts, online promotion and customers visiting websites or shops; the opposing view mentions fake websites and discarded advertisements. However, these points remain limited and are not fully explained. For example, the claim that advertising increases customers’ belief in products is not supported with a clear reason, and the second view shifts between distrust of online sellers and people ignoring adverts without explaining how common advertising causes this. Your position is present in “the adversitings is a well,” but its meaning and reasoning are unclear. Develop each view with a specific explanation and state your opinion more precisely.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0

The response has identifiable sections for the introduction, each viewpoint and your opinion, which gives it some basic organisation. The reader can generally recognise when you move from one side to the other. However, progression within paragraphs is weak: the first section moves from discounts to websites, shops and purchases without clearly linking these examples to a central claim. Connectors such as “and,” “so” and “because” are repeated or used imprecisely, and the all-capital headings and fragmented sentences interrupt the flow. Some references, including “it” and “this product,” are unclear. Use conventional paragraphs without headings, begin each with a clear main idea, and link each example explicitly to the argument it supports.

Lexical Resource: Band 4.5

You use a small set of relevant topic words, including “discount,” “brand,” “product,” “social media” and “customers,” so the subject is usually recognisable. However, vocabulary is repetitive and often inaccurate, which sometimes makes the intended meaning difficult to follow. “Adversitings” is repeatedly used where “advertising” is needed, while phrases such as “the adversitings is a well” and “increase the coustomers beleive” do not express your meaning naturally. There are also frequent spelling errors, including “sucessfull,” “beleive” and “shope(s).” Build a more precise range for discussing persuasion and attention, and check spelling and collocations. For instance, distinguish between an advertisement, advertising, and an advertising campaign.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 4.5

You attempt to express reasons and results using structures such as “because” and “when,” but sentence patterns are mostly simple, and attempts to combine ideas often become faulty or incomplete. For example, “when any company or brand give the adversiting” is a dependent clause without a complete main clause, while “the huge amount of the people visit” has problems with article use and subject–verb agreement. Verb forms and sentence boundaries are also inconsistent, as in “i will discussing” and the fragments beginning “and the brands…” Frequent missing or misplaced punctuation makes these structures harder to follow. Practise writing complete sentences with a clear subject and verb, then check agreement, articles and verb forms before adding subordinate clauses.

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