Band 7.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 7.0 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-20

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Student answer (Band 7.0)

The pie chart illustrates what graduates in Anthropology from one university did after completing their undergraduate degree, while the table provides information about the salaries of anthropologists working in different sectors.

Overall, it is clear that full-time work was the most common destination for Anthropology graduates, whereas part-time work combined with postgraduate study accounted for the smallest proportion. In addition, the table shows that anthropologists working in the government sector generally received higher salaries than those employed by private companies.

According to the pie chart, full-time work was the most popular choice, accounting for 52% of graduates. In contrast, only 5% of graduates chose part-time work combined with postgraduate study. Full-time postgraduate study and those whose destination was not known both represented approximately 8%. Meanwhile, part-time work accounted for 5% of the graduates. Overall, full-time employment represented more than half of the total.

The table shows the salaries earned by anthropologists in different types of employment. Government employees generally had the highest salaries, while those working for private companies received comparatively lower incomes. The figures also indicate differences in salary levels depending on the sector and length of experience.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.5

You have successfully identified the main features of both the pie chart and the table. The overview clearly highlights the primary destination for graduates and the salary disparity between sectors. You have selected relevant data points to support your points, such as the 52% for full-time work. However, the response lacks a detailed comparison of the salary figures. While you mention that government salaries are higher, you do not provide specific data from the table (e.g., the salary ranges or specific figures) to illustrate the extent of this difference. Including more precise data would elevate the response to a higher band.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5

The response is logically organized, with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. You use cohesive devices effectively, such as 'In contrast,' 'Meanwhile,' and 'In addition,' to link ideas and guide the reader. The paragraphing is appropriate, separating the pie chart analysis from the table analysis. The progression of ideas is smooth, and the information is presented in a way that is easy to follow. To improve further, ensure that the transition between the two distinct data sets is slightly more integrated to create a more cohesive narrative.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.5

You demonstrate a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey information clearly and precisely. Phrases like 'accounted for the smallest proportion' and 'comparatively lower incomes' are used accurately. The vocabulary is appropriate for an academic report. While the range is adequate, it is somewhat standard. To reach a higher band, you could incorporate more sophisticated or varied synonyms for 'show' (e.g., 'depicts,' 'delineates') or 'salary' (e.g., 'remuneration,' 'earnings') to demonstrate a more flexible control of lexical items.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5

Your writing is generally accurate, with a good mix of simple and complex sentence structures. You use subordinating conjunctions like 'while' and 'whereas' effectively to compare data. There are very few grammatical errors, and punctuation is used correctly throughout. The sentences are clear and easy to read. To achieve a higher band, you could experiment with more complex grammatical structures, such as using passive voice or participle clauses to describe the data more concisely, though your current control is already quite strong and error-free.

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