Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-20
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The chart illustrates the percentage of anthropology who are graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course and the chart also depicts the salaries of the anthropology in work after five years.
it is clear that, in destination of anthropology graduates, full time work with 52 % has the highest percentage at all. and the part time work plus postgrad study has 5% which was low than all.
looking at the chart, full time work was highest percentage. regarding the remaining points which was lies between 5% to 15%.
To begin, the salaries of anthropology graduates, the types of employment are three first is Freelance consultants it is 5% on 25k$ to 50k$ and the ratio of above 50k$ are standing at 15 percent and similar above 75k$ to [redacted phone]$ are standing at 40 percent after five year work. Regarding the remain that are government sector and private companies . government sector was stood at 5% at 25k$ to 50k$ and the percentage was 50% above [redacted phone]k$ salaries. private companies is stood at 10% and 1lakh% 30$.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response attempts to address both the chart and the table, but the information provided is often inaccurate or confusing. For example, the description of the data for 'part time work plus postgrad study' as 5% is unclear, and the interpretation of the salary table is disjointed. The response fails to clearly highlight the main features or make meaningful comparisons between the categories. Many figures are presented in a way that makes it difficult for the reader to understand the actual trends. To improve, you must ensure that the data you report matches the visual information provided and focus on grouping related information to create a logical summary.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The essay is divided into paragraphs, but the progression of ideas is weak. The use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or incorrect, such as 'regarding the remaining points which was lies between 5% to 15%'. The transition between the chart and the table is abrupt, and the lack of clear signposting makes the text difficult to follow. Referencing is sometimes unclear, and the overall structure lacks the logical flow required for a higher band. Improving the use of linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a clear focus would significantly enhance the coherence of your writing.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The vocabulary is limited and often repetitive. There are several instances of awkward phrasing and incorrect word choice, such as 'the percentage of anthropology who are graduates' instead of 'the percentage of anthropology graduates'. The use of '1lakh% 30$' is unclear and inappropriate for an academic report. You need to expand your range of vocabulary to describe data more precisely, using terms like 'proportion', 'accounted for', 'fluctuated', or 'remained stable'. Focusing on accurate terminology for data reporting will help you convey information more effectively.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The response contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are consistent issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'government sector was stood at 5%') and sentence structure. Many sentences are fragmented or lack proper punctuation, making the text difficult to read. There is a limited range of complex structures, and the attempts at using them are often inaccurate. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence construction, ensuring that subjects and verbs agree, and using correct tense forms when describing data. Proofreading for basic errors like 'was lies' or 'is stood' is essential.
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