Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-23
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The pie chart and table chart illustrate data regarding the Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course and the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Overall, it is clear that full-time work, while government sector.
Regarding the destination of Anthropology graduates, Full-time work accounted for 52%, significantly lower than part-time postgrad study at 5%. Similarly, not known and full-time postgrad study registered identical figures of 8% each.
Turning to Salaries of Antrhropology graduates government sector was the most popular, with $100,000 compared to $100,000 among private companies. By contrast, government compared to $100,000 among freelance consultants.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 4.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 4.0
Javob 150 ta so'zdan iborat minimal hajm talabiga javob bermaydi, bu esa bahoga sezilarli ta'sir qiladi. Bundan tashqari, mazmun to'liq emas va tushunarsiz. Aylanali diagramma bo'yicha xulosa noto'g'ri, chunki siz to'liq vaqtli ish 'significantly lower' (sezilarli darajada past) deb ta'kidlaysiz, holbuki ma'lumotlar 52% ga nisbatan 5% ni ko'rsatadi. Maoshlar haqidagi qism tushunarsiz bo'lib, raqamlarni aniq keltira olmagan yoki toifalar o'rtasida mazmunli taqqoslashni amalga oshira olmagan. Javob hajmi kamligi hamda ma'lumotlar talqini xato va to'liqsiz bo'lgani uchun, u topshiriq talablariga yetarli darajada javob bermaydi.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
Esseda mantiqiy ketma-ketlik yetishmaydi. Ikkinchi paragraf aniq xabar bermaydigan chala gapdan iborat. Paragraflarga ajratishga urinish bo'lsa-da, aylanali diagramma va jadval o'rtasidagi o'tish juda keskin. Bog'lovchi vositalardan foydalanish cheklangan va ko'pincha noto'g'ri ishlatilgan, masalan, oxirgi gapdagi chalkash taqqoslash: 'By contrast, government compared to $100,000 among freelance consultants.' Ushbu noaniqlik o'quvchiga ma'lumotlarning rivojlanishini kuzatishni qiyinlashtiradi.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
Lug'at boyligi oddiy va takrorlanuvchi. So'z tanlash va imloda bir nechta xatolar mavjud, masalan, 'Antrhropology' (noto'g'ri yozilgan) va bitiruvchilar natijalarini tasvirlash uchun 'destination' so'zining noto'g'ri ishlatilishi. Oxirgi paragrafdagi iboralar ayniqsa zaif, chunki u maosh ma'lumotlarini aniq tasvirlay olmaydi. Yaxshilash uchun tendensiyalar va taqqoslashlarni tasvirlashda kengroq lug'at boyligidan foydalanishingiz kerak, masalan, 'accounted for,' 'represented,' yoki 'the highest proportion.'
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
Javobda muloqotga to'sqinlik qiladigan tez-tez uchraydigan grammatik xatolar mavjud. Gap tuzilishida muammolar bor, masalan, 'Overall, it is clear that full-time work, while government sector.' kabi tugallanmagan gaplar. Bundan tashqari, predloglar va qiyosiy tuzilmalardan foydalanishda xatolar mavjud, masalan, 'government compared to $100,000.' Grammatik tuzilmalar doirasi juda cheklangan va xatolar o'quvchi uchun qiyinchilik tug'diradigan darajada ko'p.
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