Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-09-01
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The pie graph illustrates about anthropology graduates from one educational instituition after completed their undergraduate course. The pie table shows different salaries of anthropologists in work.
To conclude that, there are six percentages shown in the pie graph. From hightest percentage 52% for full-time work and the lowest percentage shown by the grey color in grapgh is 5%. The other main thing is this table is types of employment like freelance consultants, government sector and last one is private companies.
To begin with, the pie chart demonstrates about percentages like full-time work 52% is the higher value as compared them others like part-time work 15%, part-time work + postgrad study 5%, full-time postgrad study 8% appers in dots shape, unemployed 12% see in the lines, and the last one is not known is 8%.
Moreover, the table shows variation in salaries earned by the anthropology after completing 5 years in work. 5% of freelance consultants starting from $25,000 -49,999 and they continue rise upto $100,000 plus is 40%. The other parameters of employment like government sector earn $50,000
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response covers the main features of the data but fails to provide a clear overview or a complete summary. The description of the pie chart is fragmented, and the table data is incomplete, as the response cuts off mid-sentence. While the main categories are mentioned, the comparison between the different employment sectors and salary brackets is not fully developed. To improve, ensure you provide a clear summary of the overall trends in the introduction and ensure all data points are fully reported and compared rather than just listing figures. The response is currently too descriptive and lacks the analytical synthesis required for a higher band.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The essay is organised into paragraphs, but the logical flow is weak. The use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or inaccurate, such as 'To conclude that,' which is used incorrectly to introduce the body paragraphs. Referencing is sometimes confusing, for example, referring to the pie chart as a 'pie table' or describing visual elements like 'dots shape' and 'lines' rather than focusing on the data itself. The progression of ideas is disjointed, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparison of the information provided. Improving the use of linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a clear focus would significantly enhance coherence.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The range of vocabulary is limited and repetitive. There are frequent errors in word choice and collocation, such as 'illustrates about' (should be 'illustrates'), 'hightest' (spelling error), and 'continue rise upto' (should be 'continue to rise up to'). The vocabulary used is basic and does not demonstrate the precision needed to describe statistical data effectively. To improve, focus on learning specific collocations for describing trends and data, such as 'a significant proportion,' 'fluctuated,' or 'remained stable.' Additionally, ensure you use accurate terminology for the visual aids provided.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The response contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede clarity. Examples include 'The pie graph illustrates about anthropology graduates' and 'The other main thing is this table is types of employment.' There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and missing articles. Punctuation is inconsistent, and the incomplete final sentence demonstrates a lack of control over sentence structure. To improve, focus on basic sentence construction, ensuring that every sentence has a clear subject and verb, and proofread carefully to eliminate minor errors in tense and word order.
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