Band 6.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.5 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-10-01

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Student answer (Band 6.5)

The pie chart shows the destinations of anthropology graduates from one university after finishing their degree. The table gives information about the salaries of anthropology graduates after five years of work.

Overall, most graduates got full-time jobs after university. Only a small number studied and worked at the same time. After five years, people in the government sector usually had the highest salaries.

According to the pie chart, 52% of graduates found full-time work, which was the largest group. 15% worked part-time, while 5% did part-time work and postgraduate study. 8% continued full-time postgraduate study, and another 8% had unknown destinations. In addition, 12% of graduates were unemployed.

The table shows that many graduates earned good salaries after five years. In the government sector, 50% earned over $100,000, which was the highest figure. 40% of freelance consultants also earned more than $100,000. However, in private companies, only 30% reached this salary level, while 35% earned between $50,000 and $74,999.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 6.5

Javobda ikkala vizual topshiriqning barcha qismlari muvaffaqiyatli yoritilgan, umumiy xulosa berilgan hamda doiraviy diagramma va jadvaldagi muhim xususiyatlar tanlab olingan. Muallif kunduzgi ish eng keng tarqalgan yo‘nalish bo‘lganini to‘g‘ri ta’kidlaydi va, masalan, $100,000 dan ortiq maosh oluvchilarning eng katta ulushi davlat sektorida ekanini qayd etadi. Biroq javob yarim band darajasida qoladi, chunki barcha qismlar yoritilgan bo‘lsa-da, ayrim tafsilotlar chuqurroq ochib berilib, taqqoslanish o‘rniga shunchaki sanab o‘tilgan. Masalan, xususiy kompaniyalarga oid ma’lumotlar boshqa sektorlar bilan chuqur tahliliy taqqoslanmasdan, ketma-ket keltirilgan. Yuqoriroq bandga erishish uchun muallif keltirilgan barcha raqamlarni berilgan toifalar bo‘yicha kengroq qiyosiy tendensiyalar bilan izchil bog‘lashi kerak.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 7.0

Javob boshidan oxirigacha aniq va mantiqiy tartib hamda izchil rivojlanishni namoyon etadi. Ma’lumotlar o‘rinli guruhlangan: kirish qismidan so‘ng qisqa umumiy xulosa, doiraviy diagrammaning batafsil tahlili va nihoyat jadval ma’lumotlari tahlili berilgan. Alohida fikrlar va vizual manbalarni ajratish uchun paragraflardan samarali foydalanilgan. 'Overall', 'According to the pie chart' va 'In addition' kabi bog‘lovchi vositalar o‘quvchini matn bo‘ylab ravon yo‘naltiradi, biroq ayrim o‘tishlar matnga tabiiy singishdan ko‘ra biroz qolipga solingandek tuyuladi. Eng yuqori bandga erishish uchun muallif havolalar va o‘tishlarni yanada ravon hamda tabiiy qilishi, har bir gap avvalgisining mantiqiy davomi bo‘lishini ta’minlashi va hisobot yozishdagi odatiy qoliplarga tayanmasligi mumkin.

Lexical Resource: Band 6.0

Ishlatilgan lug‘at akademik topshiriq uchun yetarli va umuman olganda mos; 'destinations', 'undergraduate degree', 'unemployed' va 'salary level' kabi keng tarqalgan atamalar to‘g‘ri qo‘llangan. Muallif 'proportions' kabi kamroq uchraydigan so‘zlar yoki muayyan sektorlarga oid otlardan ham foydalanishga urinadi, biroq tilning katta qismi odatiy va amaliy so‘zlardan iborat. Jiddiy imlo xatolari yo‘q, tanlangan so‘zlar ko‘zlangan ma’noni aniq yetkazadi. Biroq lug‘at boyligi moslashuvchanlik va aniqlik jihatidan cheklangan, matnda topshiriqdagi oddiy fe’l va otlar ko‘p takrorlanadi. Yuqoriroq bandga chiqish uchun muallif yanada keng va murakkab so‘zlar hamda ma’nodoshlarni qo‘llashi, so‘z birikmalarini to‘g‘ri tanlash va uslubga mos so‘z ishlatishni yaxshiroq nazorat qilishi kerak.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 7.0

Yozuvda grammatika va tinish belgilaridan yaxshi foydalanilgan, sodda va murakkab gaplar aralash qo‘llangan. Muallif '52% of graduates found full-time work, which was the largest group.' kabi gaplarda ergash gaplar va teng bog‘langan tuzilmalardan muvaffaqiyatli foydalanadi. Xatosiz gaplar ko‘p, o‘tgan davr ma’lumotlarini ifodalashda fe’l zamonlari to‘g‘ri qo‘llangan. Mayda xatolar uchrashi mumkin, ammo ular muloqotga xalaqit bermaydi. Yuqoriroq bandga erishish uchun muallif murakkab gap tuzilmalarining yanada keng turidan izchil va yuqori aniqlik bilan foydalanishi, grammatik moslashuvchanlikni oshirish uchun ravishdoshli birikmalar yoki inversiya kabi ilg‘or sintaktik shakllarni qo‘llashi kerak.

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