Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-07-26

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter

• describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
• explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
• suggest what should be done about the problem

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Student answer (Band 6.0)

Subject: Regarding the complaint about garbage collection is not working properly

Dear Sir\ Madam,

I hope you are doing well.

I am writing to complaint that the rubbish collection system in my locality is not working well. This is happening from many weeks. Due to this issue, all individuals face many problems as it spread diseases or infections in our community.

Moreover, it also affected the structure when outsiders come in our surrounding area. Also, it looks filthy and awkard. We informed about this problem all community members however they did not gave any response. So, it's my hardly request to you that you resolve this problem as soon. Please strictly enforced to cleaning of this area in every weekends.

I hope you will understand my point and take it immediate action.

Thank you for your cooperation.

Yours faithfully,,

Name- komal

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0

The letter addresses all three bullet points: describing the issue, explaining the impact, and suggesting a solution. However, the response is 141 words, which falls short of the 150-word minimum requirement. This under-length impacts the development of ideas, as the points are presented in a somewhat superficial manner. To reach a higher band, you should expand on the specific nature of the 'problems' (e.g., pests, smell) and provide more detailed suggestions for the council. The tone is generally appropriate for a formal letter, but the lack of sufficient detail and the failure to meet the length requirement limit the score.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.5

The letter is organized into logical paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the structure. You use basic cohesive devices like 'Moreover' and 'Also' to link ideas. However, the flow is occasionally interrupted by awkward phrasing, such as 'This is happening from many weeks' and 'We informed about this problem all community members'. The use of paragraphing is present, but the transitions between sentences could be smoother. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words and ensuring that each sentence logically follows the previous one without mechanical repetition.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.0

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks precision and variety. You use basic terms like 'not working well', 'many problems', and 'filthy'. There are also some word-choice errors, such as 'hardly request' (should be 'earnest request') and 'awkard' (likely meant 'unsightly' or 'unpleasant'). To improve, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to waste management and formal complaints. For example, instead of 'not working well', use 'inconsistent' or 'irregular'. Expanding your range to include more sophisticated collocations will help you achieve a higher band score.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

The response contains a mix of simple and some attempted complex sentences, but there are frequent grammatical errors. Examples include 'I am writing to complaint' (should be 'complain'), 'it spread diseases' (should be 'it spreads diseases'), and 'did not gave' (should be 'did not give'). Additionally, there are punctuation errors, such as the double comma in the sign-off. While the meaning is generally clear, these persistent errors in verb tense and word form indicate a need for more careful proofreading and a stronger grasp of basic sentence construction.

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