Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-08-09
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
Nowadays, with advancement of technology have made it to possible everything. Many people believe for seeing movies no need to be visit a theatre. When some people are argue that for fully enjoy purpose cinema is the best option.
There are growing number of people who believe that smart phones is the best option. because of previous years not a facilities of online platforms. in elaborate there are options we have, such as television, smartphones and tablets. in addition, it's gives you flexibility to watch anywhere to anytime. but you just need internet.
The another reason which can not be ignored is that, OTT platforms. there are various apps and websites are available for the entertainment. for example Netflix, Hot-star, Prime Video and many apps are having in online market for entertainment. Watch movie in cinema may be cost expensive. but apps needs just recharge ones in months or multiple choice at a payment.
On the other hand, range of people believe that cinema provide a experience, that can be not easily create in home. Big-screen, sound of advancement and choice of comfortable seating makes films more enjoyable. audience can share laughter and comments together. certain advancement in technology there is 3D movies gives you live experience.
Eventually, there is not easy to answer this question. However, I tend to believe that Watching movies or series in tables, smart phones and laptop is more convenient option for me.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response addresses both views and provides a personal opinion, meeting the basic requirements of the prompt. However, the development of ideas is limited and somewhat superficial. The arguments regarding the convenience of OTT platforms and the immersive experience of cinemas are present but lack depth and specific supporting examples. Furthermore, the response is under the 250-word minimum, which negatively impacts the overall task achievement. To improve, you should expand on your points with more detailed explanations and ensure you meet the minimum word count to fully develop your arguments.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5
The essay is organised into paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the structure. However, the use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or inaccurate, such as 'in elaborate' or 'The another reason'. Some sentences are disjointed, and the logical flow between ideas is occasionally interrupted by grammatical errors. While there is a clear attempt to signal transitions between paragraphs, the overall progression of ideas is hindered by the lack of sophisticated linking words and occasional confusion in referencing. Improving the variety and accuracy of your cohesive devices will significantly enhance the readability of your work.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task but remains quite basic and repetitive. There are several instances of awkward phrasing and word-choice errors, such as 'for fully enjoy purpose' and 'sound of advancement'. While you attempt to use topic-specific vocabulary like 'OTT platforms' and '3D movies', the overall range is limited. To reach a higher band, you should focus on using more precise collocations and a wider variety of vocabulary to express your ideas more naturally and effectively, avoiding repetitive structures.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The essay contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are consistent issues with subject-verb agreement, such as 'smart phones is' and 'there are various apps... are available'. Sentence structures are often simple or fragmented, and there is a lack of control over complex sentence forms. Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with the use of full stops within sentences. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence construction, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and reducing the frequency of errors in your writing.
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