Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-10-02
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.5)
According to other individuals that electronic devices can fulfill your desire to watch movies rather than in cinema
For me i think gadgets like phone, tablets or computers is very convenient for all the people that want to watch a movies. It is simply because they dont need to travel going to the town or cinema in malls to see a movie that you like, they can use their electronic device every where or any time they want, example, if they are in shool, work or traveling around they just bring the gadgets and open it and search anything, etheir they like movies, tv programs or something informative.
For some individuals they prefer going to cinema beacuse in the inside a lot of people they can watch all together and I think it so nice and enjoyable to see in big screen action it feels like your are part of it. And they can order food and eat while they are watching, and Also you can bring the lover, friends or family in the cinema it becomes memorable.
Lastly to conclude, that people watching in the cinema or in the electronic devices are the same thing they can both enjoy it. only the difference you can watch it in solo or with other individuals, becasue i this generation all of the things are convenient you can do anything you like its up to the person how they want they life thier life meaningful and how they enjoy it for all.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5
Bahagyang natutugunan ng sagot ang gawain sa pagtalakay sa panonood ng mga pelikula sa mga elektronikong kagamitan at pagpunta sa sinehan, pati na rin sa pagbibigay ng personal na opinyon. Gayunman, limitado at hindi gaanong napauunlad ang mga ideya. Halimbawa, binabanggit ng sumulat ang kaginhawahan, gaya ng panonood 'in school, work or traveling around', pero hindi lubusang pinalalawak ang puntong ito sa pamamagitan ng karagdagang paliwanag o mga posibleng bunga. Ipinahahayag ang paninindigan, gaya ng 'For me i think gadgets like phone... is very convenient', pero nananatiling payak ang kabuuang pagtalakay sa mga talata sa gitna, kaya hindi lubusang nasusuri ang mga temang nasa paksa.
Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.5
May batayang pagkakaayos ang sagot, na may apat na talatang naghihiwalay sa panimula, dalawang pananaw, at konklusyon. Gayunman, hindi malinaw ang pangkalahatang pag-usad ng mga ideya. Madalas na hindi angkop o paulit-ulit ang mga pang-ugnay, at labis kang umaasa sa mga pang-usapang pananalita gaya ng 'Lastly to conclude' at 'For some individuals'. Paminsan-minsan ay hindi rin malinaw ang pagtukoy, gaya ng malabong paglipat sa pagitan ng mga kaisipan sa huling talata. Dahil dito, medyo putul-putol basahin ang sagot sa halip na magkaroon ng maayos at lohikal na daloy ng mga argumento.
Lexical Resource: Band 5.0
Limitado ang lawak ng bokabularyong ginamit, pero sapat ito para maipahayag ang pangunahing mensahe. Kapansin-pansin sa buong teksto ang mga pagkakamali sa pagpili ng salita at mga di-natural na parirala, gaya ng 'bring the lover, friends or family' at 'etheir they like movies'. May mga problema rin sa baybay at anyo ng salita, kabilang ang 'beacuse' at 'shool'. Sinusubukan ng mag-aaral na gumamit ng ilang pang-araw-araw na pananalita, pero dahil kulang sa katumpakan at wastong kolokasyon, nananatili sa batayang antas ang kabuuang kalidad ng bokabularyo.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0
Napakalimitado ng iba-ibang kayarian ng pangungusap sa teksto; karamihan ay payak na mga sugnay at mga pangungusap na pinagdugtong ng kuwit. Madalas na mali ang mga pagtatangka mong bumuo ng mas masalimuot na pangungusap, at marami itong pagkakamali sa gramatika, gaya ng hindi pagtutugma ng simuno at pandiwa ('gadgets... is very convenient') at kawalan ng mga pang-ukol ('in cinema' sa halip na 'in the cinema'). Dahil sa madalas na mga pagkakamaling ito, pati na rin sa di-natural na paggamit ng bantas at mga nawawalang pantukoy, nahihirapan at nag-aatubili paminsan-minsan ang mambabasa.
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