Band 8.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 8.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-07-28
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
- say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
- explain how to apply for the job
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Student answer (Band 8.0)
Dear Milan,
Hope you're doing well. I am absolutely delighted to hear that you're looking for a job in India.
I am excited to suggest a job that was recently advertised in Mumbai. The best thing is that the Alpha company is near my hometown. To be honest, local company is renowned for its professional working environment and career opportunities. The profession is of Clinical Laboratory Assistant which includes working in laboratory while handling diverse specimens and preparing to process them. I am sure this job would be a great fit for you as you're keen on hands-on experience. Furthermore, I believe you are detail-oriented and responsible person. Another thing I would suggest you to apply for this position directly on their company's website. Lastly, I would advice you to prepare your resume and relevant documents for this position at your earliest to expedite the process.
Write back soon! Can't wait to hear the positive news from you.
Best wishes,
Payal
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 8.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 8.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 8.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 8.5
The letter successfully addresses all three bullet points required by the prompt. You clearly describe the job as a Clinical Laboratory Assistant, explain why it suits your friend by highlighting their detail-oriented nature and interest in hands-on work, and provide instructions on how to apply. The tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend, maintaining a friendly and helpful persona throughout. The ideas are relevant and well-developed, ensuring the reader understands the context and the specific advice being offered. No parts of the task were omitted, and the purpose of the letter is clear from the outset.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 8.0
The letter is logically organized, with a clear progression from the initial greeting to the job description, the justification for the recommendation, and finally the application instructions. Paragraphing is used effectively to separate these distinct ideas. Cohesive devices such as 'Furthermore', 'Another thing', and 'Lastly' are used to guide the reader through the text. While the transition between the job description and the application process is slightly abrupt, the overall flow remains smooth and easy to follow. The use of referencing is generally accurate, ensuring the reader can easily track the subject matter.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.5
You demonstrate a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey your message with precision. Phrases like 'professional working environment', 'hands-on experience', and 'expedite the process' are well-chosen and appropriate for the context. There are minor issues with word choice, such as 'local company is renowned' (missing an article) and 'I would advice' (confusing the noun 'advice' with the verb 'advise'). However, these errors do not impede communication. The vocabulary is generally natural and fits the informal yet professional tone of the letter well.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The letter displays a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. Most sentences are clear and error-free, though there are a few grammatical slips. For instance, 'The profession is of Clinical Laboratory Assistant' would be more natural as 'The position is that of a Clinical Laboratory Assistant'. Additionally, there are minor article omissions, such as 'local company' instead of 'the local company'. Despite these occasional inaccuracies, your control of grammar is strong, and the meaning is never obscured. Punctuation is generally accurate, supporting the overall readability of the letter.
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