Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-08-09
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
- say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
- explain how to apply for the job
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Student answer (Band 6.0)
Dear Simar,
I hope you are doing greta. I am writing this letter to inform you that you asked me to find a job which i got for you and i think its a best match as per you preference.
It is a HR job in small local business company. It includes dealing with employees problem , hiring the best suitable employee for the business . For this job you need a strong communication, knowledge regarding country labour system. The best part is it is work from home job. It is appropriate for you as you were worried to work in the snowy weather and also you are the one who like interacting with new individuals.
To apply for this job, you need to go on the company site, there you can attach your resume and write down your qualities telling you are the asset for this job.
Looking for your positive reply.
Yours lovingly,
Sehaj
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 6.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.5 |
| Overall | 6.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0
You have addressed all three bullet points in the prompt: describing the job, explaining why it is suitable, and providing instructions on how to apply. The tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend. However, the development of ideas is somewhat limited. For example, the description of the job duties is quite brief, and the application instructions could be more specific. To reach a higher band, try to expand on your points with more detail and descriptive language, ensuring that the reader has a clear understanding of the role and the process involved.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0
The letter follows a logical progression, moving from the purpose of the letter to the job details, suitability, and finally the application process. Paragraphing is used, though the structure is quite basic. You use some cohesive devices like 'For this job' and 'To apply for this job', which help guide the reader. However, the flow between sentences could be improved by using a wider variety of linking words and ensuring that referencing is consistently clear. The overall arrangement is coherent, but the transitions between ideas feel a bit mechanical at times.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.5
Your vocabulary is adequate for the task, allowing you to communicate the main points effectively. You use some relevant terms such as 'resume', 'labour system', and 'communication'. However, there are several spelling errors ('greta', 'its' instead of 'it's') and some awkward phrasing, such as 'best match as per you preference'. To improve, focus on using more precise collocations and ensure you proofread for basic spelling mistakes. Expanding your range of vocabulary to include more descriptive adjectives and professional terminology would also help elevate your score.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5
You demonstrate a mix of simple and some complex sentence structures. While the meaning is generally clear, there are frequent grammatical errors, such as missing articles ('a HR job', 'in small local business company'), incorrect pronoun usage ('you are the one who like'), and punctuation issues. These errors do not significantly impede communication, but they are noticeable. To improve, pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles. Practicing more complex sentence structures, such as using relative clauses or conditional sentences, will also help you demonstrate better control.
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