Band 9.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 9.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-09-09

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter

• tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
• say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
• explain how to apply for the job

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

Student answer (Band 9.0)

Dear Rajat,

It has been ages since we last caught up. I hope you are doing well. I received your letter mentioning that you are planning to move to Canada and are currently looking for a job. Following up on that, I did some research in the local job market and found an opening that seems ideal for you.

The position available is for a Quality Control Inspector at a local manufacturing firm called Apex Metals. In this role, you would be responsible for inspecting raw materials, monitoring the production process, and conducting final quality checks on finished copper wiring before distribution.

I immediately thought of you because this job aligns perfectly with your background. Since you completed your degree in metallurgy and the company specializes in copper wire production, your technical knowledge will be a strong asset. Additionally, your prior experience as an ISO auditor will make navigating their quality management systems seamless.

To apply, you need to submit your resume and cover letter directly through the careers page on their official website. Make sure to emphasize your ISO auditing credentials and relevant coursework.

Let me know if you need any help refining your resume. I hope to see you here soon!

Warm regards,

Mani

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 9.0

The response fully addresses all three bullet points of the task. You clearly describe the job at Apex Metals, explain why it is suitable for your friend by linking it to his background in metallurgy and ISO auditing, and provide clear instructions on how to apply. The tone is consistently appropriate for a letter to a friend, maintaining a friendly and helpful persona throughout. The ideas are well-developed and supported with relevant details, such as the specific company name and the nature of the work, which makes the letter feel authentic and purposeful. You have successfully met all requirements of the prompt.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 9.0

The letter is logically organized with a clear progression of ideas. Each paragraph serves a distinct purpose, moving smoothly from the initial greeting and purpose of the letter to the job description, the rationale for the recommendation, and finally the application process. You use cohesive devices effectively, such as 'Following up on that,' 'Additionally,' and 'To apply,' which help guide the reader through the text without any confusion. The paragraphing is logical and contributes to the overall clarity of the message. The flow is natural and easy to follow throughout.

Lexical Resource — Band 8.5

You demonstrate a wide and natural range of vocabulary that is well-suited to the context of a professional recommendation. Phrases like 'aligns perfectly,' 'strong asset,' and 'navigating their quality management systems' show a high level of lexical control. The vocabulary is precise and used accurately, contributing to the professional yet friendly tone of the letter. There are no errors in word choice or collocation, and the language used is sophisticated enough to convey your message with clarity and nuance. This is an excellent display of lexical range.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 9.0

The writing exhibits a high degree of grammatical accuracy and a good variety of sentence structures. You successfully use complex sentences, such as 'Since you completed your degree in metallurgy and the company specializes in copper wire production, your technical knowledge will be a strong asset.' Punctuation is used correctly throughout, and there are no grammatical errors to note. The control over verb tenses and sentence construction is consistent, making the text very easy to read and professional in its presentation. The grammar is essentially error-free.

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