Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-11-03

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter

• tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
• say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
• explain how to apply for the job

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

Student answer (Band 6.0)

Dear Khushi,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter for suggest to a job which is appropriate for you. This would be beneficial because your study is completely align with this job opportunity.

The job position is registered nurse and I know you are right now registered Nurse and you have some certificates which are help to fulfill this position. In this job you need to do some basic things like give medicatoin as per doctor prescription, assiste to doctore for any procedure and provide wound care.

I would like to suggest this job to you because i know you are good for this work because you have patence, enough knowledge about different drugs and their side effects also know some hygiene protocal rules. In addition, they offer you good wages and some benefits for your family.

You can apply this job by website, in their you go career and search this position job and apply with your resume. website is here- www.nurseom.com

Thank you for considering my suggestion. I hope you will find this idea helpful, and I look forward to hearing your thoughts.

Yours faithfully,

kajal

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 6.5

You address all three points: you identify a registered-nurse vacancy, describe duties such as giving medication and providing wound care, explain why Khushi’s experience and patience suit it, and give a website-based application route. The purpose is clear and the tone is friendly. The job description and suitability reasons are relevant, but some details are asserted rather than developed—for example, “they offer you good wages and some benefits” does not specify what these might be, and the application instructions could explain what documents or steps are needed. The response already covers the task well overall; adding a little more specific support and a clearer application process would make the ideas more fully developed and consistently precise.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 7.0

The letter has a clear progression from opening, to the job and its duties, to suitability, and finally to application instructions and a closing. Paragraphing helps the reader follow these stages, and links such as “In addition” and “because” connect related points. The overall organisation is effective, though some transitions are quite formulaic, and the application paragraph is brief compared with the earlier sections. The phrase “in their you go career” also makes the sequence of instructions harder to follow. Use clearer step-by-step linking, such as “First, visit the company website. Then select Careers,” and ensure references such as “their” have an unmistakable antecedent. This would make cohesion more flexible and polished.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.5

You use relevant vocabulary for the topic, including “registered nurse,” “prescription,” “wound care,” “side effects,” and “hygiene protocol,” so the reader can understand the role and your reasons for recommending it. However, spelling and word-choice errors are noticeable, including “medicatoin,” “assiste,” “patence,” and “protocal.” Some phrases are also unnatural or imprecise, such as “suggest to a job,” “fulfill this position,” and “good wages.” These choices limit the accuracy and flexibility of the vocabulary, even though the intended meaning is generally recoverable. Build a bank of natural job-application collocations and check spelling carefully; more precise expressions would make the letter sound confident and professional.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.5

You attempt both simple and more developed sentence forms, including the explanation beginning “because your study…” and the sentence listing nursing duties. The main ideas remain understandable, but some grammatical errors recur. For example, “I am writing this letter for suggest” needs an infinitive pattern such as “to suggest,” while “your study is completely align” needs a correctly formed verb. In “you need to do some basic things like give,” the verbs should follow a consistent grammatical pattern, and “you can apply this job” needs a suitable preposition or verb construction. Review infinitives, verb forms, articles, and sentence patterns, then proofread each sentence. Greater accuracy across these structures would strengthen the range you are already attempting.

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