Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-11-14

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.

What is your opinion about this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

 

Student answer (Band 5.5)

In this task we discuss about that how much crucial is it to organised all the things and in discipline at your workplace and at home.From my perspective ,it is very beneficial for all of us to keeps all the things in the correct place and in sequence. Beacause it looks more assembled and more organised. When every thing is designed at their own place its look more charming and beautful.

I also do so much efforts to organised my all the stuff at their own place in both at home and at the work place where i spent my most of the time. In my kitchen i designed all of the manufacturing according to my crockery the kettle,oven , juicer machine all of them as a separate place and separate part in the kitchen.So its look more attractive and neat and clean.

At my work place , i also organised all of my office stuff at their own place .The laptop is in the draw,the stationary things that i used in a daily basis is on the desk in a beautiful jar.My files are organised at the side-table.So, when i do my all work in a discipline way my life is more easy and in some days i am in hurry situation it is easy for me to find my some lost things.

Actually i learned all of the discipline from my mother from my chilhood.She remain very disciplined in her life and everyone always appreicate their personality and admire her.I adopt these types of characteristic from my mother,By adopting this discipline my life become very easy.So,everyone who want to become their life more successful and easy its a key to succeed in life.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 6.0

Your opinion is clear from the beginning: you believe keeping belongings organised at home and work is beneficial. You address both settings and give relevant personal examples, such as arranging kitchen appliances and keeping office items in designated places. The explanation that organisation makes it easier to find things when you are in a hurry also supports your view. However, some points are asserted rather than fully explained: for example, saying an organised space looks “more charming” could be linked to how this affects comfort or productivity. The final claim that discipline is “a key to succeed in life” is broader than the examples establish. Develop the reasons behind your examples and connect them more directly to your overall opinion.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 6.0

The response has a recognisable overall structure: an introduction states your view, the next paragraphs discuss home and workplace organisation, and the final paragraph gives a personal influence and conclusion. This makes the main line of thought understandable. You also use linking expressions such as “From my perspective,” “Actually,” and “So.” However, some connections feel mechanical or unclear, and several sentences run together without appropriate punctuation, particularly in the kitchen example. Repeated use of “So” and “all the things” also makes the progression less smooth. Use clearer topic sentences and vary the links between cause, example, and result. Separating the kitchen and office details into well-punctuated sentences would make the organisation easier to follow.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You use enough vocabulary to communicate your main ideas, including terms related to the topic such as “organised,” “workplace,” “files,” and “disciplined.” Some choices show an attempt to be descriptive, as in “attractive” and “neat and clean.” However, the range is limited and several word choices or collocations are inaccurate, which sometimes makes the meaning awkward: “designed all of the manufacturing” does not clearly describe arranging kitchen items, and “do so much efforts” is not a natural expression. Spelling errors such as “Beacause,” “beautful,” and “chilhood” are also noticeable. Build a more precise set of words for arranging belongings and describing the benefits, and check spelling and word forms carefully.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

You attempt both simple sentences and longer structures, including a reason clause beginning “Because” and a time clause in “when I do my all work.” Your main message is generally understandable, but errors in sentence formation and verb forms recur. For example, “When every thing is designed at their own place its look” has problems with agreement and sentence structure, while “I learned all of the discipline from my mother” is followed by “She remain,” which does not maintain correct subject–verb agreement. There are also missing or misplaced articles and punctuation, and some sentences are joined without a clear boundary. Practise building accurate subject–verb patterns and use full stops to separate complete ideas; then add complex clauses once the basic sentence is secure.

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