Band 6.5 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.5 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-07-25

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.

What is your opinion about this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

 

Student answer (Band 6.5)

In this contemporary epoch, people are busy in their lifestyle. Due to busy work schedule, numerous people are not holding enough time to organize the things. In which some individual believe that we should keep our home and workplace tidy. In following paragraphs I will discuss the possible pros by adopting this habit and in the conclusion I will write my opinion.

There are numerous benefits by adopting one of the good habits. To begin with, if you do tiny changes into day to day lifestyle by keeping item on it place, you not need to give extra efforts to organize. It will not only save your time but you not need to give extra efforts. Further on, as you are keeping item on it place, you able to find item quickly when you needed it, which means on requirement you not need to spend an extra time to search the item.

Likewise, if you keep your work place organized you are able to find item easily when you needed the most. Not only that but by keeping workplace organized will also decrease work place injury which may occur. For instance trap, sleep accidents. I remember in my previous job many employees were not use to keep items organized. For example, leaving wire on floor, leaving tools un attended which were leading many accidents. By adopting good habits almost 98% accident ratio were decrease.

To sum up, by adopting tiny changes into daily lifestyle, we can achieve big targets. Keeping item organized and at their place can not only reduce work place accidents but will also help to find item easily without giving extra efforts.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.5

The response addresses the prompt by discussing the benefits of maintaining a tidy environment. However, the development of ideas is somewhat repetitive, particularly regarding the time-saving aspect. While the position is clear, the introduction is slightly formulaic and the conclusion does not fully synthesize the arguments. The example provided about workplace accidents is relevant and adds depth, but the overall discussion could be more nuanced to reach a higher band. The response covers all parts of the task, but the depth of analysis is limited, keeping it within the Band 6 range.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.0

The essay is organized into logical paragraphs, and there is a clear progression of ideas. Cohesive devices are used, such as 'To begin with', 'Further on', and 'Likewise', although some of these are used in a slightly mechanical or repetitive way. Referencing is generally clear, though some sentences lack smooth transitions between them. The paragraphing is appropriate for the task, and the overall structure allows the reader to follow the argument without difficulty. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words and ensuring that sentences flow more naturally into one another.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.5

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks variety and sophistication. There is a reliance on basic terms like 'good habits', 'things', and 'item'. While the student attempts to use some topic-specific vocabulary, such as 'workplace injury' and 'organized', the range is limited. There are some minor errors in word choice and collocation, such as '98% accident ratio were decrease' instead of 'the accident rate decreased by 98%'. To achieve a higher score, the student should aim to use more precise and varied vocabulary to express ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

The essay contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are frequent grammatical errors throughout the text, such as 'people are not holding enough time', 'you not need to give extra efforts', and 'many employees were not use to keep'. These errors occasionally impede the flow of reading, although the meaning remains clear. The use of articles and verb tenses is inconsistent. To improve, the student should focus on subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and reducing repetitive sentence patterns to demonstrate better control over complex structures.

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