Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-08-19
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
Phenomenal, Whole are must priorities in workplace and home perfectly orgnations every thinks.While are important how to manage whole thinks tidy daily life. there are good for another people visited our workplace and home.This essay will discuss many optimistic and detrimental perspective.
On the one hand,There are many beneficial perspective views for good way manage home amd workplace.Moreover,People can cleaning better way for home and worplace then multifarious benefits available.Although,Whole our items as per manage accurate location it can be most attractive our guest and some another employees. For instance, Become successful in life that is required some knowledge how and why importantly in life by better tidy in life.
On the other hand, Pessimistic taken humans they are many views for home and workplace related.Therefore,These days many infection and allergy increase during lack of tidy area.Furthermore,Dust increase due to being not manage items and lack of cleaning in home and workplace.For example, There are most important in life every were tip top cleaning by humans because of better image created for guest and employees.
In my opinion, They are humans life most optimistice views increase how to better and proper organised every items. because of that is predictions for our hygienic life style.
In conclusion,would be home and workplace voluminous manage think several items day by day as per important how to manage whole think perfectly.Thought, humans can take awerness how to lack of infections and allergy increase home and workplace cleaning by accurate Dailey. There will be most important people daily routine day to day life.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 4.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 4.5 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response addresses the prompt by discussing the importance of tidiness in the home and workplace. However, the development of ideas is limited and often unclear due to significant language errors. While the essay attempts to present both 'optimistic' and 'pessimistic' perspectives, the arguments are repetitive and lack depth. The position is stated but not consistently supported with clear, logical reasoning. The essay struggles to convey complex ideas effectively, resulting in a response that only partially addresses the task requirements.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The essay is divided into paragraphs, which provides a basic structure. However, the progression of ideas is often illogical or difficult to follow. Cohesive devices are used, such as 'Moreover', 'Although', and 'Therefore', but they are frequently misused or placed in contexts where they do not make sense, such as 'Although, Whole our items as per manage accurate location'. Referencing is often unclear, and the relationship between sentences is frequently strained, making the overall flow of the essay disjointed and hard to read.
Lexical Resource — Band 4.5
The vocabulary is very limited and often inaccurate. There is a frequent misuse of words, such as 'phenomenal' used incorrectly at the start, and 'voluminous' used to describe managing items. Many phrases are unintelligible, such as 'whole thinks tidy daily life'. The student struggles to use basic collocations correctly, and there is a lack of variety in word choice. The errors in word formation and usage are frequent and often impede the reader's understanding of the intended meaning.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 4.5
The grammatical range is extremely limited, consisting mostly of simple, fragmented, or poorly constructed sentences. There are frequent errors in basic grammar, including subject-verb agreement, article usage, and word order (e.g., 'There are most important in life every were tip top cleaning'). Complex sentence structures are attempted but are almost always grammatically incorrect, leading to a breakdown in communication. Punctuation is also inconsistent, with many run-on sentences and missing spaces after commas, which further hinders readability.
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