Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 13 · 2026-09-19
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 6.0)
It is believed by some that it is essential to keep the place clean and up to date where you live by keeping everything to the place where it belonges. I am completely agree with this point of view and will tell the reasons behind it further.
Firstly, if the place where you live is perfect and clean it will give yourself a sense of confidence as well as motivation. so, everyday you wake up and do your work and it will become a habit of you and imagine a home where evrything tidy gives you the courage to invite someone as well as yourself will do your work confidently. To examplify, imagine you have a metting at home on outlook or any platform in which your webcam is on and people can see you clearly, there are good chances of them seeing behind you eveything like you desk and even your living room and if it is clean you can confidentely talk to them never thinking about that you will being judged if they see mess behind you.
Secondly, in a well organised space you do not waste your time and save your energy as well. There are many occesions when people have to go early or they do not have enough time, in that case a home where everything is kept on the place where it suppose to be, gives peace of mind. For instance, pair of keys, which people forget after coming home or misplace them in the clothes or bags, and if there is a specific place for it then they will already know it where to look.
To sum up, being organised and well maintened is a mandetory thing for everyone and by being that way they can keep them away from many problems, as well as can become idiol for those who watch them everyday.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 6.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 6.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0
The response addresses the prompt by clearly stating a position agreeing with the importance of keeping a tidy home and workplace, supporting this opinion with relevant reasons and examples. In the first body paragraph, the writer explains how cleanliness boosts confidence and motivation, supporting this with the example of online video meetings where background tidiness prevents judgment. In the second body paragraph, the writer discusses time-saving benefits and peace of mind, citing the example of easily locating misplaced keys. The position is maintained throughout, and the ideas are extended and supported adequately, fulfilling the requirements for Band 6.0.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0
The essay has a coherent overall arrangement and follows a standard essay structure with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate distinct ideas. However, cohesion is sometimes faulty or mechanical. For instance, the transition in the second sentence of the introduction ("I am completely agree") is grammatically flawed and awkward, and phrases like "Firstly" and "Secondly" are used rather mechanically. Furthermore, referencing is not always clear, as seen in sentences with excessive length and run-on clauses, such as "so, everyday you wake up and do your work and it will become a habit of you..." which disrupts logical progression. This places the response solidly at Band 6.0.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.0
The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, attempting some less common words and phrases such as "confidence and motivation," "peace of mind," and "well maintained." However, there are noticeable spelling and word choice errors throughout the text, including "belonges" instead of "belongs," "I am completely agree" instead of "I completely agree," "evrything" instead of "everything," "metting" instead of "meeting," "occesions" instead of "occasions," and "idiol" instead of "idol." These lexical inaccuracies and spelling slips occur frequently but do not impede communication, which aligns with the Band 6.0 descriptor.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The writer attempts a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, demonstrating some ability to form subordinate clauses using words like "if" and "in which." However, grammatical accuracy is weak, with frequent errors in punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure. For example, run-on sentences with incorrect conjunction use are prevalent, such as "so, everyday you wake up and do your work and it will become a habit of you and imagine a home where evrything tidy gives you..." Additionally, there are basic subject-verb agreement and preposition issues, such as "kept on the place" instead of "in the place." These errors persist throughout the essay, though they rarely obscure the overall meaning, justifying a Band 5.0 score.
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