Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 14 · 2026-07-31
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 6.0)
In the modern era, Many people thinks friends are two category like share many opinions and another disagree avery new topics but it is good for the better choice that friends.While are must priorities in life avery friends helps avery situation another thinks many humans believe some time disagree friends they can good learning in up coming drowback in life.Both are most important because of many optimistic and pessimistic views discusse further.
On the one hand, There are many reasons due to share some guidance for beneficial opinions for friends.Firstly,Friends share guidance there are good for up coming good the future planning they are suggesting career opportunities.Secondly,They are provide helf in whole life like many problems how to fighting up coming further days.For example, On of my college group friends whole are created one of WhatsApp group that is main reason is any problems in life send message whole are suggesting how to take action regarding those problems.
On the other hand,People are many time suggestions for detrimental avery topics but it is good for many time.Therfore,Become one of successfull person they are start journey in life face many confident and unfacorable perspectives then the achieve goals.Furthermore,Being life share negative suggestions they are more encourage how to achieve those goals and how to achieve problems solutions.
In my opinion, Whole life most impotant in meet share some opinions related and many people pessimistic suggestion because both are must important our success life.
In conclusion, It can good for many people share multifarious opinions suggestion and another thinks many detrimental perspective good for humans achieve goals during inspire life. I would must important in like voluminous type of friends good in whole life because they are suggesting many optimistic and unfavorable views points.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 6.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.5 |
| Overall | 6.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0
The response addresses both views and provides a personal opinion, meeting the basic requirements of the task. However, the development of ideas is limited. The arguments regarding why friends with similar opinions are beneficial are somewhat repetitive, and the explanation of why disagreeing friends are helpful is unclear due to language barriers. The position is stated but lacks depth, and the supporting examples, such as the WhatsApp group reference, are not fully integrated into a coherent argument. To improve, you should focus on expanding your points with clearer logical links and more specific, relevant examples that directly support your stated position.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0
The essay is organized into paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the structure. However, the progression of ideas is often disjointed. While you use some cohesive devices like 'Firstly', 'Secondly', and 'In conclusion', their usage is sometimes mechanical or inaccurate, such as the transition 'Therfore,Become one of successfull person'. The referencing is occasionally unclear, making it difficult to determine the subject of certain sentences. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words more naturally and ensure that each sentence flows logically from the previous one to create a more cohesive argument.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.5
The vocabulary range is limited and often imprecise. There are frequent errors in word choice and collocation, such as 'drowback', 'helf', and 'unfacorable'. Some phrases are difficult to interpret, such as 'voluminous type of friends'. While you attempt to use some topic-related vocabulary, the lack of precision often hinders the clarity of your message. To reach a higher band, you should focus on learning common collocations and using more precise terminology to express your ideas. Reading more academic or formal texts will help you see how words are used in context.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5
The essay contains a high frequency of grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('Many people thinks'), article usage, and sentence structure. Many sentences are fragmented or run-on, which makes them difficult to parse. While there is an attempt to use complex structures, these are often faulty, leading to a lack of clarity. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence construction, specifically ensuring that every sentence has a clear subject and verb. Proofreading for common errors like pluralization and verb tense consistency will also significantly improve your score.
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