Band 7.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 7.0 · Cambridge IELTS 14 · 2026-07-29

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter

• say how you feel about his performance
• give details of your musical activities
• explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear .................. ,

Student answer (Band 7.0)

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my feeling that I experienced during your concert.

Personally speaking, I have enjoyed massively in your last music show, which organized in the Toronto festival last week. Although it was my first appearance in any musical event, I was over the moon during entire program. Moreover, all songs that you sang were amazing.

Currently, I am also the part of one of local band, which are performing in small gathering. In this group, I am the supporting singer, who is helping the lead singer. I am regularly practicing various songs on different pitch.

I would be extremely delighted if you are able to give your reviews on my singing abilities. If you are agree then I would like to sent my few audio recordings, so you can listen and suggest the improvement.

I hope you would consider my request.

Yours faithfully,

Vivek Patel.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5

You have addressed all three bullet points required by the prompt. You expressed your feelings about the concert, described your current musical activities as a supporting singer, and clearly explained how you would like the singer to assist you. The tone is appropriate for a letter to a performer, and the purpose is clear throughout. To improve, you could provide slightly more detail regarding your musical activities, such as the genre of music you perform or specific challenges you face, to better develop your ideas and reach a higher band score.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.0

The letter is logically organised with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a closing. You use basic cohesive devices such as 'Moreover', 'Although', and 'Currently' to link your ideas. However, the flow between some sentences is slightly mechanical. For example, the transition between your feelings about the concert and your current musical activities could be smoother. Paragraphing is used correctly to separate the different requirements of the task, which helps the reader follow your message easily. To improve, try to use a wider variety of cohesive devices to connect sentences more naturally.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.5

You demonstrate an adequate range of vocabulary for the task, using phrases like 'over the moon' and 'extremely delighted' to convey your emotions effectively. There are some minor issues with word choice and collocation, such as 'which organized in the Toronto festival' (should be 'which was organised') and 'I am the part of one of local band' (should be 'a part of a local band'). While these errors do not impede communication, they indicate a need for more precise control over articles and verb forms. Expanding your vocabulary to include more specific musical terminology would enhance your writing.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.5

You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical errors throughout the text, particularly with verb tenses and articles. For instance, 'I have enjoyed massively' is incorrect; 'I enjoyed the concert immensely' would be more natural. Additionally, 'If you are agree' should be 'If you agree'. While these errors are noticeable, they do not prevent the reader from understanding your message. To reach a higher band, focus on subject-verb agreement and the correct usage of articles, and try to incorporate more varied complex sentence structures with greater accuracy.

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